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all my words of darkness
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1.       lunila
200 posts
 21 Mar 2007 Wed 08:03 pm

My mind is made of dreams,letters
and papers
still keeping your ryhmes and songs.
And you,when you hear someone is playing will u know its name?

You are holding my hand
and you are walking with me trough the
unnamed city.
Do u think our desires
still burn?
Do you still have hidden weapon for all those unhumans
who are trying to tear us appart?

Iam sitting in darkness
like an old birch tree
trying to question all of this.
But you are not here my beloved one,
to give me an answers!

What will it matter
when all our dreams are dead
and we are just two dancers in oil romance?
Will u still hold my hand
while bombs are falling on us?
Will you still walk with me
trough this nuclear rain in unnamed city?
Will you still call my name
when airplain is crashing on us?
Will you be here on that day, my beloved one?

My minde is made of dreams,letters
and papers and i simply love you.
And all those words are just dark moments of my imagination.

lunila
21.03.2007

any comments are wellcome
i hope i translated well

2.       lunila
200 posts
 21 Mar 2007 Wed 09:12 pm

Quoting lunila:

My mind is made of dreams,letters
and papers
still keeping your ryhmes and songs.
And you,when you hear someone is playing will u know its name?

You are holding my hand
and you are walking with me trough the
unnamed city.
Do u think our desires
still burn?
Do you still have hidden weapon for all those unhumans
who are trying to tear us appart?

Iam sitting in darkness
like an old birch tree
trying to question all of this.
But you are not here my beloved one,
to give me an answers!

What will it matter
when all our dreams are dead
and we are just two dancers in oil romance?
Will u still hold my hand
while bombs are falling on us?
Will you still walk with me
trough this nuclear rain in unnamed city?
Will you still call my name
when airplain is crashing on us?
Will you be here on that day, my beloved one?

My minde is made of dreams,letters
and papers and i simply love you.
And all those words are just dark moments of my imagination.

lunila
21.03.2007

any comments are wellcome
i hope i translated well


*translation from my language to english i meant

3.       Uluhan
0 posts
 21 Mar 2007 Wed 11:21 pm

I guess it is called as free style poetry. Good job you'd done luni. Güzel şiir. Tebrikler.

4.       iam4fun
137 posts
 21 Mar 2007 Wed 11:35 pm

not 2 bad. i mean i think. but u can still improve urself i no which is not easy. dont give up 2 try 4 something new

5.       lunila
200 posts
 22 Mar 2007 Thu 02:45 pm

Quoting Uluhan:

I guess it is called as free style poetry. Good job you'd done luni. Güzel şiir. Tebrikler.


maybe it is freestyle poetry!
tesekkur ederim for ur comennt,Ulu

6.       lunila
200 posts
 22 Mar 2007 Thu 02:57 pm

ok

Quoting iam4fun:

not 2 bad. i mean i think. but u can still improve urself i no which is not easy. dont give up 2 try 4 something new


tesekkur ederim I am 4 fun..something new?dili çok kolay bir iş ama zor ders lol

7.       sanja_isyankar
457 posts
 22 Mar 2007 Thu 05:44 pm

Quoting lunila:

My mind is made of dreams,letters
and papers
still keeping your ryhmes and songs.
And you,when you hear someone is playing will u know its name?

You are holding my hand
and you are walking with me trough the
unnamed city.
Do u think our desires
still burn?
Do you still have hidden weapon for all those unhumans
who are trying to tear us appart?

Iam sitting in darkness
like an old birch tree
trying to question all of this.
But you are not here my beloved one,
to give me an answers!

What will it matter
when all our dreams are dead
and we are just two dancers in oil romance?
Will u still hold my hand
while bombs are falling on us?
Will you still walk with me
trough this nuclear rain in unnamed city?
Will you still call my name
when airplain is crashing on us?
Will you be here on that day, my beloved one?

My minde is made of dreams,letters
and papers and i simply love you.
And all those words are just dark moments of my imagination.

lunila
21.03.2007

any comments are wellcome
i hope i translated well



who wrote this poem ?

8.       Quasimodo
0 posts
 22 Mar 2007 Thu 05:50 pm

Quoting sanja_isyankar:



who wrote this poem ?



No, the question is, for whom did she write it?

9.       sanja_isyankar
457 posts
 22 Mar 2007 Thu 05:54 pm

Quoting Quasimodo:

Quoting sanja_isyankar:



who wrote this poem ?



No, the question is, for whom did she write it?



yea,please corect me....ok i know she typed it by her fingers
and i want original poem ,if i can have if of course....

10.       lunila
200 posts
 23 Mar 2007 Fri 12:05 am

Quoting sanja_isyankar:

Quoting Quasimodo:

Quoting sanja_isyankar:



who wrote this poem ?



No, the question is, for whom did she write it?



yea,please corect me....ok i know she typed it by her fingers
and i want original poem ,if i can have if of course....


selam sanja,
it is mine poem so..i mean i wroted!

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