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lets see how that story will end..
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14 Sep 2007 Fri 11:42 pm |
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here i begin..
it was a shiny september day...
who is going on?
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:06 am |
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then let me wear my sunglasses 
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:12 am |
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...and I have just come from living in jungles, at trees! My god, so, it is this that they called "civilization"? Is it these neon lights? Vitrines? Sewer systems? Buildings? People who are always in hurry- going to work in the morning and coming back to homes in the evening ? I think I should return to my jungle, to go on living at trees!
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:12 am |
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Quoting oeince: here i begin..
it was a shiny september day...
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It was the kind of day when you just wanted to be outside in the sunshine. However, today was different. This was no ordinary day.
Today was ....
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:14 am |
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but it was a quiet day, it seemed everyone was hidding someplace .....
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:17 am |
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If we are to talk always about the day, then I shall not play the game anymore. What a day I don't understand!
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:18 am |
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Quoting geniuda: but it was a quiet day, it seemed everyone was hidding someplace ..... |
Suddenly Pagliaccio walks down the street. Aha! Here is the reason why everyone was hiding. In his hand is a black suitcase. People stared from their windows ...where on earth was he going? 
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:21 am |
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Ok, ok... wait...wa it... this way, we can't reach anywhere. Let's start from the beginning again!
it was a shiny september day... and I have just come from living in jungles, at trees! My god, so, it is this that they called "civilization"? Is it these neon lights? Vitrines? Sewer systems? Buildings? People who are always in hurry- going to work in the morning and coming back to homes in the evening ? I think I should return to my jungle, to go on living at trees!
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:32 am |
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and suddenly a strange thing coming over the sky is seen..
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:35 am |
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Quoting AEnigmaIII: suddenly... |
Quoting oeince: and suddenly |
Does everything have to happen suddenly?
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:36 am |
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Quoting pagliaccio: Does everything must happen suddenly? |
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:42 am |
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Ok, let's resume from the jungle-point.
....I think I should return to my jungle to go on living at trees!
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:43 am |
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I think aa sniper leaps out of the shadows
suddenly of course
and ends Pagliacco's role in this story
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:44 am |
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girleegirl - please edit your post quoting my post - "Does everything must happen suddenly?"
The last version should be as follows:
"Does everything have to happen suddenly?"
Thank you for your consideration.
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:46 am |
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mmmmmm I don't know...I will consider it
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:47 am |
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suddenly is a kind of reset in a story i guess.. good catch pagli..
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:47 am |
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Quoting oeince: suddenly is a kind of reset in a story i guess.. good catch pagli.. |
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:49 am |
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Ok. Are you ready? Let's start from the outset again!
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:51 am |
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Quoting pagliaccio: Ok. Are you ready? Let's start from the beginning again! |
Two words....control freak! 
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:52 am |
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girleegirl - please edit your post again.
The latest version of my post is as follows:
"Let's start from the outset again"
Thank you for your understanding.
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:54 am |
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Quoting AEnigma III: While you are at it, you cannot live "at trees" only IN them or AMONG them |
Ah, thank you for correcting Aenigma. I thought I could live AT trees. Sorry. 
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 12:57 am |
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So, can I live ON trees? e.g. On a branch of a tree?
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 01:18 am |
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then what happened Pagliaccio? did you ever return to the jungle?
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 01:19 pm |
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THREAD ABANDONED DUE TO PEDANTIC PAGLIACCIO
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 06:38 pm |
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Quoting KeithL: I think aa sniper leaps out of the shadows
suddenly of course
and ends Pagliacco's role in this story
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Keith L took care of that...
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 06:49 pm |
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Quoting oeince: it was a shiny september day... |
and all was quite, no-one around, not on the beach, in the park, all stores were closed. "where the hell had everyone got to?" I wondered to myself.....
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15 Sep 2007 Sat 06:59 pm |
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Quoting oeince:
it was a shiny september day...
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I was not certain about it though. Once I was told by some it was September; then October corrected other some. October... Offf, october or september - did this really matter? I know not now. But I saw something in her eyes- something resembled October. Maybe her name was October! Was it for this reason that I always loved October?
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29 Mar 2010 Mon 03:18 am |
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Let´s start from the outset again!
Suddenly appears pagliaccio on the stage!... And then a girl among the audience suddenly thinks, even feels: "Oh God!... How perfekt it would be, to have him as boyfriend!..."
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30 Mar 2010 Tue 03:13 am |
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then what happened Pagliaccio? did you ever return to the jungle?
To be honest, I have never ever left the jungle!
Ehi!
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