Hahah pagliacco you are like a spoilt child. You dont like anyone else to play this game except you eh? You keep stopping and complaining!!

Its better if you finish the sentence with a "lead" for the next person to "add to".

Suddenly Pagliacco was enraged at AEnigma's comments and....

Ok, let's resume from the jungle-point.

....I think I should return to my jungle to go on living at trees!

I think aa sniper leaps out of the shadows

suddenly of course


and ends Pagliacco's role in this story

girleegirl - please edit your post quoting my post - "Does everything must happen suddenly?"

The last version should be as follows:

"Does everything have to happen suddenly?"

Thank you for your consideration.

mmmmmm I don't know...I will consider it

suddenly is a kind of reset in a story i guess.. good catch pagli..

While you are at it, you cannot live "at trees" only IN them or AMONG them

Ok. Are you ready? Let's start from the outset again!