Thankyou very very much I knew that I made lots of mistakes thanks for helping me.

this is my try..

I was like a honey bee before you
But I become  a moth since I saw you

Though I become ashes from burning every moment
Still, I can not leave you
I dedicated my life to your path
I can not live without you
Though I become ashes from burning every moment
Still, I can not leave you
Even if I live for a thousand year
I can not get enough of you

I have given you my heart, you delicate beauty
If i dont have you, I will die unfulfilled

give me your hands
life is beautiful when loving you
I dedicated my life to your path
come, dont run away beauty


give me your hands
life is beautiful when loving you
I gave my life to you, delicate beauty

 Well yours is obviously better but I was only trying to correct the English a bit!

Thankyou very much both of you .