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My Poetry

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kai
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13 Oct 2006 Fri 09:26 pm

You do not need to translate this into TÃ¼rkÃ§e if you do not wish to, but I would appreciate it if you left your comments

Love

Between love there is nothing,
nothing but two people,
two people in the thoughts
of dreams coming true.

Hand in hand as time flys by,
watching the world around them.

They see nothing but love,
nothing but happiness,
nothing but dreams coming true.

As dreams come true a furute begins to grow,
a future so true, so pure,
A future developed from one word.
Love

cyrano
0 posts

13 Oct 2006 Fri 10:09 pm

I would like to reflect your want on mine as well. This is my first poem in English. Any comment is welcome.

Nothing But Everything

And the wind is blowing
Of you am I thinking
Why is there nothing
I am asking, asking
O my love but everything.

13th October'06
Turkey

Trudy
7887 posts

13 Oct 2006 Fri 10:16 pm

@ Kai: it is beautiful. (But why not true for me?)

Trudy
7887 posts

13 Oct 2006 Fri 10:19 pm

@ Cyrano: beautiful as well. And while the wind is blowing I hope for you and for me (not together...) the second line become truth.

kai
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13 Oct 2006 Fri 10:28 pm

Quoting Trudy:

(But why not true for me?)

what do you mean Trudy? :-S

Trudy
7887 posts

13 Oct 2006 Fri 10:53 pm

Quoting kai:

Quoting Trudy:

(But why not true for me?)

what do you mean Trudy? :-S

You are speaking so beautiful about love between two people. It makes me wanting that too.

aenigma x
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14 Oct 2006 Sat 01:04 am

Quoting cyrano:

Awww Cyrano that's wonderful. I am glad to also see you have not given up English completely for your French

cyrano
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14 Oct 2006 Sat 01:57 am

Quoting aenigma x:

Quoting cyrano:

Awww Cyrano that's wonderful. I am glad to also see you have not given up English completely for your French

arabianofelix
144 posts

14 Oct 2006 Sat 01:58 am

Great Peoms you two!

Kai, it's geart and full of descriptiveness and meaning!
It's like you translated it from another langauge.
A language that doesn't exist!

10.

cyrano
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14 Oct 2006 Sat 01:59 am

Quoting Trudy:

@ Cyrano: beautiful as well. And while the wind is blowing I hope for you and for me (not together...) the second line become truth.

Merci Trudy. Hopefully I will keep posting many more as long as you give me support by such kind comments.

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