You do not need to translate this into Türkçe if you do not wish to, but I would appreciate it if you left your comments

Love

Between love there is nothing,
nothing but two people,
two people in the thoughts
of dreams coming true.

Hand in hand as time flys by,
watching the world around them.

They see nothing but love,
nothing but happiness,
nothing but dreams coming true.

As dreams come true a furute begins to grow,
a future so true, so pure,
A future developed from one word.
Love

I would like to reflect your want on mine as well. This is my first poem in English. Any comment is welcome.

Nothing But Everything

And the wind is blowing
Of you am I thinking
Why is there nothing
I am asking, asking
O my love but everything.

13th October'06
Turkey

@ Kai: it is beautiful. (But why not true for me?)

@ Cyrano: beautiful as well. And while the wind is blowing I hope for you and for me (not together...) the second line become truth.

Great Peoms you two!

Kai, it's geart and full of descriptiveness and meaning!
It's like you translated it from another langauge.
A language that doesn't exist!

Kai, you already know I'm a huge fan. When is the first edition coming out? Oh, and I want it autographed too.

"Between love there is nothing....A future developed from one word."


I adore these two lines. They really emphasize the purity of love and its power. Man, what our world would be like if we all had a future procreated by love.

Ok guys if you think it is good idea to have your poems in other languages, here is russian.

Kai, this is for you.

V lyubvi net nichego
Krome dvukh lic,nichego,
Dvukh lic v razdumye
O sbivshikhsya snakh.

I vremya letit mimo nikh
Idut oni ruka v ruku,
Sozertsaya okrujayushiy mir.

Ne vidyat oni nichego, tol'ko lyubov',
Tol'ko schastye i blajenstvo.
Ne vidyat nichego krome sbivshikhsya cnov.

Sbivayutsya sni i budushee rastyet
Takoe zrimoe, takoe bezoblachnoe,
Budushee, rojdennoe iz odnogo tol'ko slova -
Lyubov'

В любви нет ничего,
Кроме двух лиц, ничего,
Двух лиц в раздумье
О сбывшихся снах.

И время летит мимо них,
Идут они рука в руку,
Созерцая окружающй мир.

Не видят они ничего,только любовь,
Только счастье и блаженство.
Не видят ничего кроме сбывшихся снов.

Сбываются сны и будущее растёт,
Такое зримое, такое безоблачное,
Будущее, рождённое из одного только слова -
Любовь,



And here is , Cyrano for you(even though you did not ask for it)

Nichto, no Vse

Duet veter
I vse dumi o tebe
Net jelaniya prosit' nichego
[I pochemu je ne proshu ya nichego]
O, lyubov' moya, ya proshu vse.


Ничто но Всё

Дует ветер
И все думы о тебе
Нет желания просить ничего
[И почему же не прошу я ничего]
О, любовь моя, я прошу всё.

Kai, here's yours in Hebrew:

אהבה

בתוך האהבה אין דבר כלשהו
דבר כלשהו מלבד שני אנשים
שני אנשים במחשבות
של חלומות שמתגשמים

יד ביד כשהזמן עובר
מתבוננים בעולם סביבם

אינם רואים דבר מלבד אהבה
דבר מלבד אושר
דבר מלבד חלומות שמתגשמים

כשחלומות מתגשמים עתיד מתחיל לצמוח
עתיד כה אמיתי, כה טהור
עתיד שהתפתח ממילה אחת
אהבה

Ahava

Betoh ha-ahava eyn davar kolşehu
davar kolşehu milvad şney anaşim
şney anaşim bamahşavot
şel halomot şe-mitgaşmim

yad beyad kşehazman over
mitbonenim ba-olam svivam

hem eynam roim davar milvad ha- ahava
davar milvad oşer
davar milvad halomot şe-mitgaşmim

kşe-halomot mitgaşmim atid mathil litsmoah
atid ko amiti, ko tahor
atid şe- hitpateah mimila ahat
ahava

and that's yours Cyrano:

שום דבר אבל הכל

והרוח נושב
עליך אני חושב
מדוע אין שום דבר
אני שואל, שואל
או אהובתי, אבל יש הכל

şum davar aval hakol

veharuah noşev
alayih ani hoşev
madua eyn şum davar
ani şoel, şoel
o ahuvati, aval yeş hakol

Here's a Polish version


Miłość

Między miłością nie ma niczego,
niczego prócz dwojga ludzi,
dwojga ludzi pogrążonych w myślach
o spełniających się marzeniach.

Dłoń w dłoni, kiedy mija czas
oglądając świat wokół nich.

Nie widzą nic oprócz miłości,
nic oprócz szczęścia,
nic oprócz spełniających się marzeń

Gdy spełniają się marzenia, zaczyna rosnąć przyszłość
Przyszłość tak prawdziwa, tak czysta,
Przyszłość wyrosła z jednego słowa.
Miłość

Ayle,
Do we pronounce it in Turkish or in English ?

ok I turned it to Turkish pronounciation

WOW! THANK YOU!!!!!! I get to publish my book in so many languages now
Anyone for the Turkish translation for it?

Love
الحب

Between love there is nothing,
nothing but two people,
في الحب لا يوجد شىء
لا يوجد الا شخصان,

two people in the thoughts
of dreams coming true.
شخصان في أفكار عن أحلآم تتحول الى حقيقه

Hand in hand as time flys by,
watching the world around them.
,يد باليد و الزمن يمر
يشاهدون العالم من حولهم

They see nothing but love,
لا يرون شىء الا الحب
nothing but happiness,
لا شىء الا السعاده
nothing but dreams coming true.
لاشىء الا احلآم تتحول الى حقيقه

As dreams come true a furute begins to grow,
وعندما تتحول الأحلآم الى حقيقه يبدأ المستقبل ينمو
a future so true, so pure,
مستقبل في منتهى الواقع في منتهى النقاء
A future developed from one word.
مستقبل متنامي من كلمه واحده
Love
الحب

here is the arabic version too,it's so lovely kai

for kai = just wonderin, you said in another forum that you could translate in a bunch of languages for everybody else. so why cant you translate your poems yourself?

I tried to do it in French and I was doing well until I got stuck on the second verse then again it is not too bad because I did translate a Marriage proposal Take a look ---
http://www.turkishclass.com/forumTitle_11_9343

Anyway here is my attempt at German. I think I done pretty well but anyone who is fluent in German can you correct me if I made a mistake. Thank you

Liebe

Zwischen der Liebe gibt es nichts,
nichts als zwei Menschen,
zwei Menschen in den Gedanken
sich erfüllender Träume.

Hand in der Hand als Zeit flys,
wie sie die Welt um sie beobachten.

Sie sehen nichts als Liebe,
nichts als Heiterkeit,
nichts als sich erfüllende Träume.

als Träume erfüllen eine Zukunft beginnt zu wachsen,
eine Zukunft so wahr, so rein,
Eine Zukunft entwickelte sich von einem Wort.
Liebe

Errm, someone correct me if I'm wrong, but wasn't this section meant for TURKISH literature and poetry and recommendations?

There is an off-topic section in case you feel the need to produce some poetry yourself

french translation for you kai...

Amour
Entre l'amour il n'y a rien,
Rien mais deux personnes,
Deux personnes dans les pensées des rêves venant vraies.

De concert comme de temps passe près, observant le monde autour d'eux.

Ils ne voient rien mais amour,
Rien mais bonheur,
Rien mais rêves venant vraies.

Comme les rêves viennent vraies un futur commence à se développer,
Un futur si vrai, si pur,
Un futur développé à partir d'un mot.
Amour

Love in many languages!!! Sweet, LOVE it!!

Can she move it ? or needs a Moderator to do so ?!

Isn't life a little to short to worry exactly where a thread should be? I never understand why so many arguments occur on here over the most trivial subjects. And that is my Friday afternoon, I bloody bored reaction to this thread!