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let's make a poem of ours
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24 Feb 2007 Sat 03:31 pm |
I will start with some lines.
Everybody is welcomed to add theirs
Let's make a poem about YOU(your lover, your best friend , someone very important to you etc) whom you want to express your feelings.
add in turkish or english.
someone will gather them together later into one.
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YOU START
when the darkness starts
driving me into world of worries
when I can't find a way out,
shining like a star
breaking through dark clouds,
you start
lighting everything around
taking my worries away...
karanlık bastırıp
beni hüzünler diyarında sürüklediğinde
kaçacak bir yol bulamadığımda,
bir yıldız gibi parlayarak
karanlık bulutları delip geçen,
sen başlarsın
çevremdeki herşeyi aydınlatarak
hüznümü alıp götüren...
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24 Feb 2007 Sat 04:13 pm |
When I first saw you
My heart
Started beating faster
Now that you left this world
My heart
Only feels empty
Aww, sorry that I made it a bit sad
*It will be a very big poem then!!*
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24 Feb 2007 Sat 05:45 pm |
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24 Feb 2007 Sat 06:31 pm |
deleted
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25 Feb 2007 Sun 04:38 am |
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25 Feb 2007 Sun 05:48 am |
Can't tell the story of mine
Too hard...
Hardly can remember how we met
Cautiously...
Soon I'm leaving
And I'm loosing you
From the love of my life
Flying away...
Can't live without you
Still thinking of us
Can't portray
What I feel right now
Snow covers the traces up
Without telling anyone
That we were together
And how much I love you
Half an hour till departure
Passed registration
And, as usual
Looking for your eyes
Fail to find the warmth of your hands
So unusual...
I'm leaving
I'm loosing you
From the love of my life
I'm flying away...
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25 Feb 2007 Sun 10:31 am |
A big sorry to Gavi by heart for the mistake that I have done.
And sorry to everybody getting this offensive.
I thought that I was helping. I will be more careful on my helps starting from now.
And sorry for the warning that I didn't see it on time.
It was my sleeping time.
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25 Feb 2007 Sun 10:37 am |
Hello again,
There is already a thread to share your poems.
So please post your poems to that thread.
I was intending to make a poem with everybody adding a couple of lines or just one line to it.
The starting goal was to add some ''lines'' to others' posts.
So, to make a poem with our ''lines'' only not adding poems after poems.
But since it looks like it won't get to its goal.
I vote for the deletion of this post and forgetting the idea forever.
Stay in peace,
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:50 pm |
NO no no, Dont cancel out this thread. I think it's a great idea to do the joining poem. I missed some of what happened, but I'm guessing people misunderstood the point of this thread and started to write full poems. Maybe you tried to write a post which may have been offensive which is why its deleted. But so what? come on, its a good idea for a thread , so keep it going. its all good!
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 04:29 pm |
Quoting xkirstyx: NO no no, Dont cancel out this thread. I think it's a great idea to do the joining poem. I missed some of what happened, but I'm guessing people misunderstood the point of this thread and started to write full poems. Maybe you tried to write a post which may have been offensive which is why its deleted. But so what? come on, its a good idea for a thread , so keep it going. its all good! |
Thanks xkirstyx for your support.
I was intending to make a joining poem.
It won't be sooo poetic maybe (who knows?), but it would be fun to share our poetic thoughts in some lines.
My idea for the topic was YOU.
To say the things to someone who is invaluable to you.
Friend, lover, family, even enemy etc...
I started with these lines
when the darkness starts
driving me into world of worries
when I can't find a way out,
shining like a star
breaking through dark clouds,
you start
lighting everything around
taking my worries away...
and Chantal added these.
When I first saw you
My heart
Started beating faster
Now that you left this world
My heart
Only feels empty
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You are welcomed to add your lines.
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