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Hopeless Love Poems-3
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17 Mar 2007 Sat 11:25 pm |
four out of ten of love
like greeting an abyss
like merging with a crowd
like cursing a fraud
like whistling a song
is to love you.
17 March'07, Warsaw
Comments of any kind are welcome.
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 11:25 am |
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 01:33 pm |
Yeah, that's why:
to write a poem is
like teaching you a lesson
like ridiculing your claxon
like making you fall into a trap
like inserting in your ass a strap
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 03:02 pm |
Like a snowflake resting on your nose,
like a raindrop trickling down your cheek,
Like a sunbeam reflecting in our hair
Like a lazy wind, searing your bones
From Mount Everest
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 06:42 pm |
Libralady- Though not so complete in every respect as mine, your poem, too, is a very good work,
like a fresh breath from Alps
like a sudden cry from depths
like a quick turning a bend
like a greeting from a friend.
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 09:49 pm |
Robyn - Lately you have seemed to be so frightened. Please, my dear poor Robyn, please don't fear! Nothing can harm you. I am here beside you. Just try to confess... don't ever fear!... confess, Robyn...that you prefer mine, not libralady's... that you adore my poem rather than hers.
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 10:18 pm |
Quoting Quasimodo: Robyn - Lately you have seemed to be so frightened. Please, my dear poor Robyn, please don't fear! Nothing can harm you. I am here beside you. Just try to confess... don't ever fear!... confess, Robyn...that you prefer mine, not libralady's... that you adore my poem rather than hers.
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It took as long to think of it as it did to type it - about 30 seconds!!
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 11:45 pm |
Quoting Quasimodo: Robyn - Lately you have seemed to be so frightened. Please, my dear poor Robyn, please don't fear! Nothing can harm you. I am here beside you. Just try to confess... don't ever fear!... confess, Robyn...that you prefer mine, not libralady's... that you adore my poem rather than hers.
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i'm sorry it must just be that lately i swallowed a 'be truthful' pill and i'm fresh out of confessions 
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 11:46 pm |
Quoting libralady:
It took as long to think of it as it did to type it - about 30 seconds!! |
You see, Robyn, even libralady herself confesses that she wrote her poem in 30 seconds. So, how can you expect such a 30 second poem to be perfect and preferable to mine? Please open your eyes to facts and see mine is far better than hers. At least I spent so much more time than 30 seconds!
P.S. Like many of yours, this post, too, went killing-two-birds-with-one-post-type!
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