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Hopeful Love Poems to lunila - 1
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 05:03 am |
first love first excitement
lunila! lunila! my kingdom for lunila!
with your name fell I love in first
then with your beautiful eyes
your hands, fingers, nails
feel cotton I wish to caress
your slave let me be, lunila
be my all, my love, my wife
I promise you happiness
though I am penniless
19 March'07, Moscow
Only lunila's comments are welcome.
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 11:06 am |
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 01:57 pm |
Lately appeared suddenly too many astrologers at TC. Yet they are not only astrologers, but also experts of almost all fields. They are associate professors, teachers, masters... They are psychologists. They are mind-analysts and soul-analysts and behaviour-analysts. They are experts of Turkish, English, even Esperanto. They are experts of Shakespeare, English Literature. No science and art is available that they haven't studied for years in their so-called universities. They are experts of sanitary pad. Experts of fingernail polish. Experts of fish. Experts of wood. Experts of loophole. In short, they are experts of my ass!
If anyone wonders and wants to find out what and how, for example, their personalities and characteristics are, they just post a message onto these pages. Their personalities and characteristics will be analyzed from A to Z by astrologers and experts of my ass for free of charge.
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 02:06 pm |
Quoting Quasimodo: first love first excitement
lunila! lunila! my kingdom for lunila!
with your name fell I love in first
then with your beautiful eyes
your hands, fingers, nails
feel cotton I wish to caress
your slave let me be, lunila
be my all, my love, my wife
I promise you happiness
though I am penniless
19 March'07, Moscow
Only lunila's comments are welcome. |
merhaba!
i see quasimodo that u r serious
u made me happy reading this poem,but if i have three years old brother he could write this one too
u see iam hard to get
ce soir a Notre Damme
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 02:10 pm |
Well... I won't give up! I do still have hope! And of course I will come up with better one. Ehi!
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 02:12 pm |
Quoting vineyards: I detest those who make advances to others in public places. All of a sudden, out of the blue, a lover emerges from nowhere. He is the ardent admirer of that girl; he devotes all his life; he becomes a slave of hers and he is ready to sacrifice everything in her sake. He proposes marriage without ever seeing his big love.
That sort of behaviour is typical to a jester for whom the feelings of others, their personailities and stances in life are nothing but a game he can freely play with. Well, in a circus this might work but not in our private lives.
If you want others to have some respect for you, try to show them some respect first. It is evident that you are not a poet and your advances are nothing more than a part
a cheap game you are playing solo. If you decide to
improve yourself now and begin to work on it, you can be more like it, in the future. As for today, the role you want to play is way too sophisticated for you. Get real.
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dear Vine,
u know that i apreciate ur opinion very much and that i find u as extraordinary person,but here on this subject i think u r taking it too much to urself.
quasimodo seems nice altough i never talked to him,and he is just trying to makes us smiling or providing any emotion!
that why he is posted here and not in pm!
he is quasimodo..and quasimodo have food heart..yeah he is ugly..but who cares for beauty,heart is important!
gorsuruz my friend vine!
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 02:14 pm |
Quoting Quasimodo:
Well... I won't give up! I do still have hope! And of course I will come up with better one. Ehi!
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quasimodo,
i see u r really into it!
i have specific taste..so maybe it will take u 20years of writing for this Lunila lady
but go for it!
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 03:21 pm |
Quoting Quasimodo: lunila! Why do you spoil the fun? We were without breath watching how perfectly he, as an astrologer and expert of my ass, was analyzing my personality! If you repeat it again, I swear I will no longer write to you my love poems! |
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 03:24 pm |
Quoting lunila: Quoting Quasimodo: lunila! Why do you spoil the fun? We were without breath watching how perfectly he, as an astrologer and expert of my ass, was analyzing my personality! If you repeat it again, I swear I will no longer write to you my love poems! |
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lunila appears on the window.
luniet:o quasimodo,quasimodo,wherefore art thou quasimodo!
deny thy father and refuse thy name.
or of thou wilt not,be but sworn my love
and i ll no longer be miss.untouchable!
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