4 small corrections pleaaaaaase .. I have put what I think it is ..

dinimiz seni görmeme izin vermiyor - religion you to see permission/leave you to give.

cunku because

ciddi olan aşk sabır ve şevkati güçlendirir - the important things love, patience and enthusiasm will make you stronger.

seni bana beni sana daha cok bagliyor - you to me my for you more devoted / I am more devoted to you

sana çok sıkı bağlandım dört AYDIR KONUŞUYORUZ - to you very firm i was bound four we are talking?? this I have absolutely no clue

dinimiz seni görmeme izin vermiyor -
our religion doesn't permit me to see you

cunku
because

ciddi olan aşk sabır ve şevkati güçlendirir -
the serious love strengten patience and compassion

seni bana beni sana daha cok bagliyor -
it attaches you to me and me to you more

sana çok sıkı bağlandım dört AYDIR KONUŞUYORUZ -
I've been attached to you very tightly, we've been talking for four months

tesekkurler ayla ..
I can get some .. and then others I have brain freeze .. .. go figure ..

keep trying, it seems that you're getting it gradually

tesekkurler .. I definitely am not giving up .. .. I enjoy learning new languages ..