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Why always the fighting, always the pain?
1.       Gabbriy
34 posts
 26 Sep 2007 Wed 07:45 am

I've never placed a poem here before, and this one just came word after word. Compared to my feelings, that of myself and the world.

Weither it be Father to all wives and relationships, Mother to daughter and Grandmother to Grandaughter, Best Friends Forever to one another, and many more... it is always fighting.
Maybe this poem will help...?

-I stand up strong
Straight as I can
-I look appearing
To my fullest
To who I am
-I smile and laugh
Though I am sad
-I complain at little things
For I am scared,
To share large feelings

-In my mind
It runs so fast
-Tired so much more
I may not last
-It breaths so heavy
I just may pass
-Even half asleep
I try to keep up, alas...

-Body stiff
Hardly a thanks from the work
Hardly a thanks from the thoughts
Hardly a thanks in this stress
Even as my kindness works

-In nights slumber
I sleep not soundly
-My mind ponders
Running madly
-Stuck in the middle
Yet put on the top
-Oh my oh me
I'm so distraut

-Tears rarely fall
Though my chest carries harsh
-Seeming as if high sometimes
Trying too hard to look fine

-As I'm in all the screaming
The yelling
sometimes bad words
-I'm stuck in the middle
Yet at the top of all control

-Mother slacked with me
Unable to understand
-Too sensitive she be
Had me grow up as such

-It's hard to be mean
To fight for my rights
-It's hard to think clearly
Away from the arts of my mind
-It's hard to register
Many things anymore
-It's hard to not cry
For weakness cannot be shown...

I note to myself
day in and day out
Relizing such
That no matter what
All the doubt overpowers
And shows so much

That no matter what
There will be no one
To stand by my side
To listen
To share feelings

Too many lies
Too deep of secrets

No one to handle
All of these worries
While I hold them alone
And pray to God
The pain I uphold

Lord take me aflight
Protect me in your wings!
Show me the way
Through the shadowy days!
Lord guide my path and give me strength!
I am your daughter in your warm embrace...

Amen

Well that was it *gives a bow and leaves*

2.       girleegirl
5065 posts
 26 Sep 2007 Wed 07:53 am

Sorry to tell you Gabbriy but this forum is for Turkish poetry.

3.       Gabbriy
34 posts
 27 Sep 2007 Thu 02:07 am

I don't get it (?)

4.       Gabbriy
34 posts
 27 Sep 2007 Thu 02:09 am

Should I not be able to express my poetry?

5.       CANLI
5084 posts
 27 Sep 2007 Thu 02:13 am

No Gabbriy,you could,but you should post it at off the topics not in the poetry and Literature Forum,because its for Turkish Poetry,that is what girleegirl meant.

6.       girleegirl
5065 posts
 27 Sep 2007 Thu 08:52 am

Yes, that is what I meant. Thank you Canli.

7.       Gabbriy
34 posts
 28 Sep 2007 Fri 07:23 am

It says that this is posted in "other"

8.       girleegirl
5065 posts
 28 Sep 2007 Fri 09:11 am

It was moved to "Off Topic".

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