Cheers m'dear!

Thanks to Trudy for her hotel list that we consulted on our way round.

Sonunda, I´m not a mod but I had in the past several essays uploaded so maybe I´m allowed to say what I think (and if not a mod will correct me I´m afraid... ): I think you should extend your story, do tell a bit more about what you saw, smelled, heard. Tell about who you met, where you´ve been, what it did to/with you. Where you surprised, overwhelmed, stunned, angry, irritated or what?

These tips I got from friends when I started to write essays two years ago and I must say, not only that I like them myself better, but reactions I get are much more positive. I hope you don´t mind me minding your business, it´s just a good meant advise.

Ok thanks!