Merhaba!

Could someone please tell me if my translation attempt of Hayko Cepkin´s "Senin Ki Dert Mi" is right? Corrections are most likely needed for the second verse because I have yet to get that far with learning some grammar used.

Çok teþekkürler!!

Senin Ki Dert Mi

Not really sure how to phrase this in English. Something about ´your sorrow/worry´???

Ýçimden bir ses
Uyanma diyor
Baþlayan herþey
Þimdi bitiyor

From inside of me a voice

Says not to wake up

Everything that has started

Is ending now

Susamýþ dilim
Bir damla su verdi
Seven sen olunca
Uyanmak istedim

You gave my thirsty tongue

A drop of water

But when there is a love like you (??????????)

I wanted to wake up

Merhaba!

Could someone please tell me if my translation attempt of Hayko Cepkin´s "Senin Ki Dert Mi" is right? Corrections are most likely needed for the second verse because I have yet to get that far with learning some grammar used.

Çok teþekkürler!!

Senin Ki Dert Mi

Not really sure how to phrase this in English. Something about ´your sorrow/worry´???

Is yours a sorrow?

Ýçimden bir ses
Uyanma diyor
Baþlayan herþey
Þimdi bitiyor

From inside of me a voice

Says not to wake up

Everything that has started

Is ending now

Susamýþ dilim
Bir damla su verdin
Seven sen olunca
Uyanmak istedim

My tongue got thirsty

You gave a drop of water

When it is you who loves

I wanted to wake up

 I think better this way

 It looks ok to me. By the way Hayko is one of my favs his voice is great!

 Thanks! I love him too. I am a huge fan! And, as you can see, I am using him to help me learn and improve my Turkish ^_^

 good choice

 Agree. One of the best ways to learn! (if you use ´good´ lyrics )