Did I write this correctly

Ben James im. Zekiim. Benim araba cok kirik. Ermin arabasi buyuk. Kendim ufak.Yiyerek benziyor.

Hi James,

It helps translators when you write what you want to say in both English and Turkish if you want translations checked.

ad = name

(Benim) adým James = means my name is James, the ´benim´ which means "my" is optional, as ´adým´ means "my name" already.

Zeki = clever, intelligent

To add the suffix for "I" you were correct in adding the "im", but Turkish doesn´t allow two vowels to join (with the exception of old arabic, or borrowed words), so in this case it needs a buffer letter ´y´

So to say ´I am clever´ it is ´zekiyim´

Hope this helps.

To introduce yourself, you can say "ben James" without adding -im suffix. Or as Henry explained, "(Benim) adým James" is another way to say it.

The word kýrýk is used for just one part of a mechanic thing. Your car doesn´t consist of only one part, so you cannot say "kýrýk". Kýrýk is like glass, or a piece of iron got broken into two or more parts so it doesn´t work anymore. For araba, you can say "bozuk": Arabam bozuk.

I don´t understand the rest.

Ermin arabasý buyuk - ´Ermin´s car is bigger? - then it would be ´Ermin´in arabasý daha büyük´ I think

Kendým ufak - possibly ´I am small´? - ´Küðüyüm/Ufaðým (´k´ has to change to ´Ã°´

Yiyerek benziyor - ´he appears by eating´? - sorry, can´t work this one out

Yiyerek benziyor: maybe he´s trying to say: it looks as if he´s eating/ he appears to be eating?

Yemiyora benziyor.

btw: shouldn´t ´i am small´ be translated as ´küçüðüm´?