Could someone please translate the following:

Hi handsome,

I am good, but tired.  How are you and How is work?  i´ve been busy at the hospital, looking forward to a rest and going on holiday.  Will I see you in September when I visit?

My try as a learner, but wait for corrections and improvements:

Hi handsome,

Merhaba yakýþýklý

I am good, but tired. 

Ýyiyim ama yorgunum.

How are you and How is work?

Nasýlsýn? Ýþin nasýl?

I´ve been busy at the hospital,

Hastanede çok meþguldüm,

looking forward to a rest and going on holiday.

iyi bir dinlenme ve tatýlý dört gözle bekliyorum.  

Will I see you in September when I visit?

Eylülde ziyaret ettiðimde seni görebilecek miyim?

Henry just small improvements if you do not mind

Why " seni görebilecek miyim?" and not just ´seni görecek miyim´?

Thanks.

Thanks for the improvements toggle. 

And to answer your question Sonunda,

I added the ´abýl´ suffix, as I interpreted the last question as

´will I be able to see you?´, because I assumed she would try and see him if it was possible.