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This Racist Place
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10.       uYkuSuz
614 posts 		 25 Apr 2006 Tue 01:15 am

Wow
Good job Ceyda..
i like it

11.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts 		 28 Apr 2006 Fri 08:37 pm

Quoting miss_ceyda:

its all good.. till the last line.. i couldnt find a word that ryhmed with it hehe so u have to kind of read the last word with a suffolk accent to make it work hehe



I’m so sick of this racist place,
.....
Maybe I’m just a normal person,
But I don’t deserve this pointless cursin’.




alphaf has suggested that i use the word "arson" for the last word.. what do you guys think?

12.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts 		 29 Apr 2006 Sat 02:57 pm

joey also suggests "question" to be the last word..

what do u guys think????

13.       AlphaF
5677 posts 		 29 Apr 2006 Sat 06:35 pm

I think AlphaF's suggestion is much better...

14.       libralady
5152 posts 		 29 Apr 2006 Sat 07:05 pm

As someone who lives in the next county it makes complete sense to me!!

You say person like "purson" so it rhymes with "cursin"

15.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts 		 29 Apr 2006 Sat 07:20 pm

so should i change it or not?

16.       libralady
5152 posts 		 30 Apr 2006 Sun 10:03 pm

Quote:


This Racist Place

I’m so sick of this racist place,
Maybe you can tell by the look on my face,
The teachers, the students are all the same,
They’re proud of who they are, where’s the shame?
Everyday I’m living this hell,
I’m not sure if others can tell,
Because I’m different and proud to be,
I’m detested and laughed at; Oh God! Why me?
Maybe I’m just a normal person,
But I don’t deserve this pointless cursin’.



How about finishing it like this?

Under this skin i'm just the same,
so lets end this pointless game

but otherwise leave it!!

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