bu arada bi arkadasimin kardesi kiz hem biyolog hemde fen ogretmeni..yurt disinda okul arastiriyormus senin mail adresini versem ona akil vede fikir verir misin?Liseden Gonul`u hatirlarsin onun kardesi cok akilli ve tatli bi kiz,,

 By the way my friends sister is both a science and biologist teacher, she studied at an International school. will you give her advice and also an idea if I give your msn address. You remember Gonul from high school, his sister is a very clever and sweet girl.

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My try:

By the way, my friend´s sister is both a biologist and a science teacher. She is looking for a school abroad. Would you advice her if I gave your e-mail to her. You would remember Gönül from high school, her sister. She is a cute and smart girl.

Sorry deli I found it easier to retranslate it instead of correcting your translation. Yours is not bad either for me but meaning is alittle bit different.

Hi toggle, my very small correction to your English

Would you advise her if I gave your e-mail to her.

to advise (fiil) tavsiye etmek, nasihat etmek, öğüt vermek

Advice (isim) öğüt, nasihat

Thank you Henry. Indeed I hesistated whether to use advise or advice. Now I know.

 no problem toggle I prefer that rather than having red marks through my attempts  I always hated that at school