I would like to send this message now. Could you please check me if it is correct, and tell me what does it exactly mean? i´d like to avoid a mistranslation of my thoughts

"Dilerim yeni yasinda mutluluklarin en güzelini yasar, basari merdivenlerini tirmanirsin ve dilerim yüzün hep güler.. Dogum günün kutlu olsun!"

thank you!

I did not see any mistakes, it is a good message. And here what it means:

I wish you´ll live the best happiness, climb the steps of achievement in your new age and i wish your face always will smile.. Happy birthday!

It´s English might be wrong, because of my lack of knowledge

As a learner I can see a few incorrect Turkish letters, but I can´t comment on the wording

"Dilerim yeni yaşında mutlulukların en güzelini yaşar, başarı merdivenlerini tırmanırsın ve dilerim yüzün hep güler.. Doğum günün kutlu olsun!"

if it´s meant for sms, then what´s the difference... 

ayo7 asked whether the text was correct. As there are many learners on this site, and also Turks who want to see correct letters used, I corrected the errors I noticed. Maybe it will be sent as an email or letter, who knows?

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