Hello my friends, I´m a new user in this great site and I would like to ask you for your help with this speech, it´s a surprise I want to give to my turkish girlfriend... I tried to do it on my own but my level is too low and I know it´s a disaster

So this is:

You’ll be immortal in me!

You seduced me .
You seduced me in just an instant
In a dark, gray evening of winter
In which I had no choice but to adore you
Because you already reigned in my dreams.

Bende ölümsüz olacaksın

Beni baştan çkardın.

Beni bir anda baştan çıkardın.

Karanlık, gri bir kış akşamı

Ki sana tapmaktan başka bir şansımın olmadığı.

Çünkü çoktan rüyalarımda egemenliğini kurdun.

You just showed up.
You just showed up suddenly, adorning all my senses
As a massive eruption of faith that resonated within me
Crystallizing the sea of ​​dreams living in my dull mind
Dull as the star that is dying out, losing all its glory.

And you changed me.
Into a romantic and dreamer man,
Juggler of  illusions,
Lover of the love,
and faithful slave of the passions.

You accompanied me.
You accompanied me since then in times of pain,
In the bitter sorrows and fruitful  joys,
In the beautiful and sublime moments of love,
In the metamorphosis of my being and its immense fantasies.

Sometimes I thought I didn’t love you,
I think that´s when I realised I adored you
May my eyes be eclipsed and overshadowed, but I’m afraid
That you´ll stay in my life.

A real blessing...

Was your arrival and to meet you,
It was a miracle to know you´d be mine forever,
May my voice be silent and my hands unable to move;
But your love will be safe in my heart ... unfading abide in me forever.

Very grateful I write these lines to you
As the earth in drought thanks to the rain its arrival
We may separate by the time that God decides,
But you will be immortal in me, dear girl of mine!

Thanks in advance!