Can someone please translate this into Turkish..? elegantly if possible

Why don´t you look her in the eyes when she´s talking to you ?

I can´t because it´s like staring into the sun.

Thank you.

You think this old cliche is elegant in English ?

Seninle konuşuyor zaman neden onun gözlerine bakmıyorsun?

yapamam çünkü bu güneşe bakıyorum gibi

my try 

Why don´t you look her in the eyes when she´s talking to you ?

Neden seninle konuşurken, onun gözlerine bakmıyorsun ?

I can´t because it´s like staring into the sun.

Yapmam, çünkü bu güneşe bakmak gibi birşey.

Thx alot guys but after you posted that i was wondering if this would be better ?

Neden onunla konuşurken, gözlerine bakmıyorsun ?
Yapamam, çünkü bu güneşe bakmak gibi birşey.

what do you think ?

Try google...

?? i meant no disrespect here. I know its a corny sentence but im honestly

trying to learn something, thats the only reason i asked if my version was better or worse.

But my apologies if i have offended you.

Offended ? I dont have a time for that. Your post was simple and translate of it also simple. We are trying to help in here.

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