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I´m kind of insecure about my Turkish so I just thought I´d check my translation here first. If I want to say: "I think I´ll be in Adana then, but I´m not sure. Do you know? I can ask Yağmur." (name changed because I´m slightly paranoid)

it would be

"Bence Adana´da olacağım o zaman, ama emin değilim (is the comma in this sentence correct?). Siz biliyor musunuz? Yağmur´a sorabiliyorum (present continuous tense is correct?).

Right?

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In my opinion, " Do you know" is unnecessary there, and bit  English way of expressing.

I will translate it in Turkish way [ to me at least ]

Sanırım , o tarihte Adana´da olurum, ama tam emin değilim. Bak aslında Yağmura sorabilirim.

No need to be paranoid. You think people will track you because you wrote a name?

Nah not really...just it´s not my name (obviously) and I don´t know how comfortable she would be with me bandying her name about. But mostly it´s just ´cause I´m paranoid.

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