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My third poem in English
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23 Oct 2006 Mon 01:57 pm |
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A Love Poem
To her... who likes ricocheting stone on the surface of water.
The streets turned on blue, misted up my eyes
I smiled, went mad, cried one more time
Neither the sky nor the sea is blue my beautiful love
Four times four nights, between us the four lost symphonies
I experienced the four seasons in your eyes
That all poets tried to describe, all painters draw
The most beautiful blue they are
How could I say now I had a mind
- I was blind, I was blind! -
The streets turned on blue, misted up my eyes
I smiled, went mad, loved you one more time
Look, I beg you, into my eyes.
23rd October'06, Turkey
Any comment is welcome.
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23 Oct 2006 Mon 02:29 pm |
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How about WOW!!
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23 Oct 2006 Mon 02:42 pm |
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Quoting cyrano: Any comment is welcome. |
For the first time here....I am lost for words...except, its beautiful 
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23 Oct 2006 Mon 04:00 pm |
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It certainly is beautiful. So romantic.
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02 Nov 2006 Thu 02:50 pm |
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that is a lovely poem thank you for sharing 
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02 Nov 2006 Thu 05:02 pm |
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İt's so lovely,heartful,and reaching the heart .
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12 Mar 2007 Mon 05:20 am |
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Quoting cyrano: A Love Poem
To her... who likes ricocheting stone on the surface of water.
The streets turned on blue, misted up my eyes
I smiled, went mad, cried one more time
Neither the sky nor the sea is blue my beautiful love
Four times four nights, between us the four lost symphonies
I experienced the four seasons in your eyes
That all poets tried to describe, all painters draw
The most beautiful blue they are
How could I say now I had a mind
- I was blind, I was blind! -
The streets turned on blue, misted up my eyes
I smiled, went mad, loved you one more time
Look, I beg you, into my eyes.
23rd October'06, Turkey
Any comment is welcome. |
With one word - Excellent! Thank you, cyrano! Please keep posting your works. 
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12 Mar 2007 Mon 08:48 am |
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touching really. thank u for sharing. 
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12 Mar 2007 Mon 12:15 pm |
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excellent and soul-searching, thanks for a very romantic poem
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12 Mar 2007 Mon 12:30 pm |
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Quoting TeresaJana: touching really |
Quoting Pizza: excellent and soul-searching |
I can do nothing but to agree with you. He is indeed a great poet!
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