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				| 60. | 09 Oct 2006 Mon 01:28 pm |  
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	 | Quoting miss_ceyda: I took your advice of the "I" thang.. OMG.. Re-reading it back like that really made me realise how many times I had used "I" at the beginning of my sentences!!
 Thank you so much for pointing that out, really!!
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 Glad to help Miss C - and good luck.  Actually I just saw another good example of a "first person" essay in Turkish Essays by Trudy.  She has written a long essay about her experiences in Istanbul and has done so well to avoid "I" at every sentence!  It's such a hard thing to do!
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				| 61. | 09 Oct 2006 Mon 01:31 pm |  
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	 | Quoting aenigma x: | Quoting miss_ceyda: I took your advice of the "I" thang.. OMG.. Re-reading it back like that really made me realise how many times I had used "I" at the beginning of my sentences!!
 Thank you so much for pointing that out, really!!
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 Glad to help Miss C - and good luck.  Actually I just saw another good example of a "first person" essay in Turkish Essays by Trudy.  She has written a long essay about her experiences in Istanbul and has done so well to avoid "I" at every sentence!  It's such a hard thing to do!
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 hmm i managed to do it on about half of them, but not all of them.. hopefully this wont make a difference
   
 thank you again
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				| 62. | 10 Oct 2006 Tue 03:16 am |  
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	im against discrimination in human beings,so i have nothing to write here piss-ceyda  thanks   |  |  
	
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				| 64. | 14 Oct 2006 Sat 01:52 pm |  
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	OMG.. I JUST REALISED THERE IS ANOTHER PART TO THE QUESTION... IT WAS AT THE VERY END...
 "	What conclusions can you draw for your own teaching of English?      "
 
 
 OMG, WHAT SHALL I DO? SHOULD I ADD THIS IN AS I GO ALONG (IN EACH PARAGRAPH) OR JUST DO A PARAGRAPH AT THE END? :S
 
 HELP!!
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				| 65. | 14 Oct 2006 Sat 02:21 pm |  
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	Always put your conclusion at the end and title it:
 Conclusion:  It should be too long, concise and to the point and clearly a conclusion.
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				| 66. | 14 Oct 2006 Sat 02:36 pm |  
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	I agree - the conclusion should definitely go at the end		 |  |  
	
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				| 67. | 14 Oct 2006 Sat 02:51 pm |  
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	AHH i liked my conclusion though.. .i dont know how im going to fit that in now   
 i was planning to start reading the pther text for my next essay today... im so confused. omg...
 
 shall i combine it with my conclusion that i have written or what.. i dont know omg...
 
 i dont even know what to write..
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				| 68. | 14 Oct 2006 Sat 02:55 pm |  
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	MY FIRST CONCLUSION:
 It is this, my own experience of learning Turkish, which has inspired me to become a language teacher as I can finally understand how important languages are to the world. We could be nowhere without them and under no circumstances would I want to see other people in the position I was in. As I have been studying, I have learnt many methods which can make learning another language easier than it initially appears to be. I do not want to keep these methods to myself. I want to help everyone I can! Languages open many doors to us and for that reason… I have also taken a course in Spanish! There is no stopping me now.
 
 
 
 THE LAST PART OF THE QUESTION:
 "What conclusions can you draw for your own teaching of English?"
 
 
 
 WHAT AM I GOING TO DO YAA
 
 WONT WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN DO? I really think this would be ok actually...? Maybe it doesnt have to be that long??
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				| 69. | 14 Oct 2006 Sat 03:42 pm |  
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	 | Quoting miss_ceyda: 
 WONT WHAT I HAVE WRITTEN DO? I really think this would be ok actually...? Maybe it doesnt have to be that long??
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				| 70. | 14 Oct 2006 Sat 03:50 pm |  
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	missceyda hun i dont think that is enough detail to constitute a conclusion, given that technically it is drawing together all of the work u have done above and determining why u want to teach english..u have done this..but im not entirely sure that it would be sufficient..really, in my opinion i would suggest that u conclude this throughout ur work where appropriate. It is always useful to conclude throughout the essay as well as concluding like this at the end..and u know i aced my subjects including english   
 anyways i hope u get this in time...hope it helps u and doesnt worry u :-S
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