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A love poem :)
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23 Feb 2007 Fri 09:21 pm |
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Just a poem I wrote. Any comments welcome  hope you like it:
Finding the one I love
Through wondering eyes
throughout my life,
searching high and low
trying to find the one I love.
Through all of my heart beats,
that my heart has pumped,
I try to match the beat.
The beat of the persons heart I love.
Throughout all the hands I touched,
I hadn’t found none quite like those,
those belonging to him.
To the person I love.
Through all the voices I heard,
I heard none quite like his,
the softness of it, none matched to his.
To the person I love.
Through all the eyes I have seen,
seen smile, laugh and even cry.
None made me want to dive into them, unlike his.
The person I love.
Then I found you…
I found the heartbeat that matched mine.
I found those hands I’d been longing to touch.
I found the voice that makes me shiver at its softness.
I found the eyes I’d been dying to dive into.
I found the person I love.
I found you.
NJW
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24 Feb 2007 Sat 02:17 am |
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Quoting nautilis: finding the one is hard, keeping it is harder, good luck |
Thanks
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25 Feb 2007 Sun 02:47 am |
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Aww Kai that was beautiful! I look forward to hearing more of your poems. If there are any more I mean. What a talent you have!
Beautiful once again! 
Sue.
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25 Feb 2007 Sun 08:27 pm |
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Quoting babey: Aww Kai that was beautiful! I look forward to hearing more of your poems. If there are any more I mean. What a talent you have!
Beautiful once again!
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Oh thank you babey  I'm glad you like it. As for writing another, I write when I feel I can, when the thoughts of what I want to write come into my head, as does most poets
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 02:00 am |
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Quoting kai: when the thoughts of what I want to write come into my head, as does most poets |
"as DO most poets"
I love to drive fast, but this does not make me Schumacher.
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 02:45 am |
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Quoting aenigma x: Quoting kai: when the thoughts of what I want to write come into my head, as does most poets |
"as DO most poets"
You are a poet too? I really have to admit I am in awe of your self-confidence Kai (said without sarcasm). Perhaps modesty is a thing of the past in today's culture 
How can I say this .... umm .... I love to drive fast, but this does not make me Schumacher. |
You don't need a degree to call yourself a poet, the same with an artist....yes you can get a degree in both of them but it doesn't me your any less of one if you don't.
As a famous poet once said (not sure which one, i'll try to find it on net, unless anyone else know who it was? :-S ) "knowledge is required to speak from the head, but poets do not speak from the head, they speak from the heart, therefore no knowledge is required, anyone can do it"
I don't know about you but I agree
P.S. what do you mean by "too?" I'm hardly anything else.
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:00 am |
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Quoting kai: I don't know about you but I agree |
I agree that writing poems is a wonderful way to express your feelings (especially when you are very young and in love) and we all guilty of it, especially during our "first love". But does that make us all poets? Only in our own eyes I think
Anyway, I was too harsh and amended my earlier post (my bad mood is to blame). I am sorry you quoted me BEFORE I amended it Kai
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:06 am |
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Quoting kai: P.S. what do you mean by "too?" I'm hardly anything else. |
(1) A gifted singer!
(2) A multilinguist.
(3) A scholar (who will go to Oxford)
(4) A future doctor....
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:09 am |
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Quoting aenigma x: Quoting kai: I don't know about you but I agree |
I agree that writing poems is a wonderful way to express your feelings (especially when you are very young and in love) and we all guilty of it, especially during our "first love". But does that make us all poets? Only in our own eyes I think |
I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm "in love"! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me 
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:13 am |
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Quoting aenigma x: Quoting kai: P.S. what do you mean by "too?" I'm hardly anything else. |
(1) A gifted singer!
(2) A multilinguist.
(3) A scholar (who will go to Oxford)
(4) A future doctor....
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a gifted singer????  hahahahahaha you really need to hear me sing!!!  I don't even sing infront of my partner....actuallly make that especially not infront of 
a multilinguist....I like learning them but wouldn't and have never called myself a multilinguist.
and oxford, well, one can dream, can they not?
and a Doctor I hope to be....as do many people I know, nothing wrong with saying wha you want to be.
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