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A love poem :)
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23 Feb 2007 Fri 09:21 pm |
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Just a poem I wrote. Any comments welcome  hope you like it:
Finding the one I love
Through wondering eyes
throughout my life,
searching high and low
trying to find the one I love.
Through all of my heart beats,
that my heart has pumped,
I try to match the beat.
The beat of the persons heart I love.
Throughout all the hands I touched,
I hadn’t found none quite like those,
those belonging to him.
To the person I love.
Through all the voices I heard,
I heard none quite like his,
the softness of it, none matched to his.
To the person I love.
Through all the eyes I have seen,
seen smile, laugh and even cry.
None made me want to dive into them, unlike his.
The person I love.
Then I found you…
I found the heartbeat that matched mine.
I found those hands I’d been longing to touch.
I found the voice that makes me shiver at its softness.
I found the eyes I’d been dying to dive into.
I found the person I love.
I found you.
NJW
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24 Feb 2007 Sat 02:17 am |
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Quoting nautilis: finding the one is hard, keeping it is harder, good luck |
Thanks
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25 Feb 2007 Sun 02:47 am |
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Aww Kai that was beautiful! I look forward to hearing more of your poems. If there are any more I mean. What a talent you have!
Beautiful once again! 
Sue.
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25 Feb 2007 Sun 08:27 pm |
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Quoting babey: Aww Kai that was beautiful! I look forward to hearing more of your poems. If there are any more I mean. What a talent you have!
Beautiful once again!
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Oh thank you babey  I'm glad you like it. As for writing another, I write when I feel I can, when the thoughts of what I want to write come into my head, as does most poets
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 02:00 am |
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Quoting kai: when the thoughts of what I want to write come into my head, as does most poets |
"as DO most poets"
I love to drive fast, but this does not make me Schumacher.
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 02:45 am |
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Quoting aenigma x: Quoting kai: when the thoughts of what I want to write come into my head, as does most poets |
"as DO most poets"
You are a poet too? I really have to admit I am in awe of your self-confidence Kai (said without sarcasm). Perhaps modesty is a thing of the past in today's culture 
How can I say this .... umm .... I love to drive fast, but this does not make me Schumacher. |
You don't need a degree to call yourself a poet, the same with an artist....yes you can get a degree in both of them but it doesn't me your any less of one if you don't.
As a famous poet once said (not sure which one, i'll try to find it on net, unless anyone else know who it was? :-S ) "knowledge is required to speak from the head, but poets do not speak from the head, they speak from the heart, therefore no knowledge is required, anyone can do it"
I don't know about you but I agree
P.S. what do you mean by "too?" I'm hardly anything else.
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:00 am |
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Quoting kai: I don't know about you but I agree |
I agree that writing poems is a wonderful way to express your feelings (especially when you are very young and in love) and we all guilty of it, especially during our "first love". But does that make us all poets? Only in our own eyes I think
Anyway, I was too harsh and amended my earlier post (my bad mood is to blame). I am sorry you quoted me BEFORE I amended it Kai
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:06 am |
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Quoting kai: P.S. what do you mean by "too?" I'm hardly anything else. |
(1) A gifted singer!
(2) A multilinguist.
(3) A scholar (who will go to Oxford)
(4) A future doctor....
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:09 am |
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Quoting aenigma x: Quoting kai: I don't know about you but I agree |
I agree that writing poems is a wonderful way to express your feelings (especially when you are very young and in love) and we all guilty of it, especially during our "first love". But does that make us all poets? Only in our own eyes I think |
I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm "in love"! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me 
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:13 am |
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Quoting aenigma x: Quoting kai: P.S. what do you mean by "too?" I'm hardly anything else. |
(1) A gifted singer!
(2) A multilinguist.
(3) A scholar (who will go to Oxford)
(4) A future doctor....
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a gifted singer????  hahahahahaha you really need to hear me sing!!!  I don't even sing infront of my partner....actuallly make that especially not infront of 
a multilinguist....I like learning them but wouldn't and have never called myself a multilinguist.
and oxford, well, one can dream, can they not?
and a Doctor I hope to be....as do many people I know, nothing wrong with saying wha you want to be.
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:15 am |
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Well, along with a previous classmate, I am confused. I remember a few posts months ago where you commented that your friends had complimented your singing and that you had been asked to sing at your school.
I also remember you saying you were "fluent in many languages" - is this not the same thing as multilinguistic?
You have also told us that you will definitely become a doctor.
Apologies for taking your posts so seriously! And now, its a good time to go to bed 
Iyi geceler!
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:23 am |
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Quoting aenigma x:
Well, along with a previous classmate, I am confused. I remember a few posts months ago where you commented that your friends had complimented your singing and that you had been asked to sing at your school.
I also remember you saying you were "fluent in many languages" - is this not the same thing as multilinguistic?
You have also told us that you will definitely become a doctor.
Apologies for taking your posts so seriously! And now, its a good time to go to bed
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I never said I was fluent....thats the problem that I hate...I am not fluent in any language except English of cousre, I just no bits of many languages, thats why my goal is to learn at least one language fluently.....spanish inshallah.
and yes I was asked to sing at school, but why do you think I turned it down? Also, friends just say it to be nice....well thats what I think anyway hence why I said to school "hell no!!!"
definitly being a Dr is what I keep telling myself because my family are not so supportive if you get my meaning, not even my mom 
iyi geceler
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 04:50 am |
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Quoting kai: ....as do many people I know, nothing wrong with saying wha you want to be. |
Quoting kai: I am not fluent in any language except English of cousre |
Quoting kai: especially not infront of a multilinguist |
"Wha", "cousre", "infront"... very fluent English, indeed... almost poetic...
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 09:40 am |
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You should take Duda seriously - although she would not admit it here, she IS a multilingual published poet and a VERY clever cookie 
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 03:23 pm |
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Rhyme & Punishment
I like to write an ode or rhyme
It’s a fun way to pass the time
After many years of composition
I am here is this strange position
The hardest part of the whole process
And the least enjoyable I must confess
Unless of course you pay a mint
Is to get the bloody stuff into print
Thought this was appropriate!!
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 04:19 pm |
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Ode To Libralady
I never thought I'd ever say,
A post of your's would make my day! 
(A bit of a Rubert Bear rhyming couplet for you )
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 07:01 pm |
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Quoting aenigma x: Ode To Libralady
I never thought I'd ever say,
A post of your's would make my day!
(A bit of a Rubert Bear rhyming couplet for you )
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Hey you are a poet
and you didn't really know it
BOOOOOM BOOOOOM (Basil Brush style)
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 07:39 pm |
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Quoting duda: Quoting kai: ....as do many people I know, nothing wrong with saying wha you want to be. |
Quoting kai: I am not fluent in any language except English of cousre |
Quoting kai: especially not infront of a multilinguist |
"Wha", "cousre", "infront"... very fluent English, indeed... almost poetic...
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Such things as typos as I'm sure your aware of
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 07:40 pm |
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Quoting libralady: Rhyme & Punishment
I like to write an ode or rhyme
It’s a fun way to pass the time
After many years of composition
I am here is this strange position
The hardest part of the whole process
And the least enjoyable I must confess
Unless of course you pay a mint
Is to get the bloody stuff into print
Thought this was appropriate!!
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...made me laugh
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 08:39 pm |
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Quoting kai: Quoting aenigma x: Quoting kai: I don't know about you but I agree |
I agree that writing poems is a wonderful way to express your feelings (especially when you are very young and in love) and we all guilty of it, especially during our 'first love'. But does that make us all poets? Only in our own eyes I think |
I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm 'in love'! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me |
Sorry if Im being thick - but if you LOST it, how do you know where it is?? :-S
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26 Feb 2007 Mon 08:42 pm |
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Quoting lady in red: Quoting kai: Quoting aenigma x: Quoting kai: I don't know about you but I agree |
I agree that writing poems is a wonderful way to express your feelings (especially when you are very young and in love) and we all guilty of it, especially during our 'first love'. But does that make us all poets? Only in our own eyes I think |
I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm 'in love'! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me |
Sorry if Im being thick - but if you LOST it, how do you know where it is?? :-S |
...didn't quite explain myself. Basically I lost it to my dads side of the family and it may be a little hard getting in back
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27 Feb 2007 Tue 09:48 pm |
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Quoting kai:
a gifted singer???? hahahahahaha you really need to hear me sing!!! I don't even sing infront of my partner....actuallly make that especially not infront of
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Partner? Does this mean you have moved out and now living with a man??
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27 Feb 2007 Tue 09:56 pm |
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Quoting kai: I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm 'in love'! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me.......
If it was that important that you remember writing it after all these years - then surely you must remember what it was about and could therefore have a go at re-writing it.
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27 Feb 2007 Tue 11:34 pm |
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Quoting lady in red: Quoting kai: I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm 'in love'! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me.......
If it was that important that you remember writing it after all these years - then surely you must remember what it was about and could therefore have a go at re-writing it. |
i agree, if it was lost since you were 11 how does aenimga know about it?:-S
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 12:48 am |
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Kai, I think the reason we get confused by your posts sometimes is that you DO seem to contradict yourself
Quoting kai: I never said I was fluent....thats the problem that I hate...I am not fluent in any language except English of cousre, I just no bits of many languages, thats why my goal is to learn at least one language fluently.....spanish inshallah.
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Quoting kai: ...i am very good in other languages so if you have any other languages you need to be translated then let me know and i will see what i can do.
the languages i can mostly help in are: English
French
German
Spanish
Portugese
Russian
Japanese
Italian
Dutch
Chinese (simplified
and traditional)
Greek
Korean
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 12:51 am |
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Quoting libralady: Quoting kai:
a gifted singer???? hahahahahaha you really need to hear me sing!!! I don't even sing infront of my partner....actuallly make that especially not infront of
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Partner? Does this mean you have moved out and now living with a man?? |
I think he's in US LL and kai is still in UK so I'm guessing 'no'
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 12:54 am |
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Quoting aenigma x: Kai, I think the reason we get confused by your posts sometimes is that you DO seem to contradict yourself
Quoting kai: I never said I was fluent....thats the problem that I hate...I am not fluent in any language except English of cousre, I just no bits of many languages, thats why my goal is to learn at least one language fluently.....spanish inshallah.
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Quoting kai: ...i am very good in other languages so if you have any other languages you need to be translated then let me know and i will see what i can do.
the languages i can mostly help in are: English
French
German
Spanish
Portugese
Russian
Japanese
Italian
Dutch
Chinese (simplified
and traditional)
Greek
Korean
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You just made my point clear, I never said I was fluent, I just said good, there is a difference. I also said I wasn't fluent in any langauge (except English of course) and that I would like to learn one language fluently, hence I am studying Spanish.
Also, friends said they would help me if I got stuck.
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 12:55 am |
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Quoting lady in red: Quoting kai: I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm 'in love'! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me.......
If it was that important that you remember writing it after all these years - then surely you must remember what it was about and could therefore have a go at re-writing it. |
It was nearly 6 years ago I wrote it and I remember what it was about clearly but it is that one I very wanted what meant a lot and where it had been read is what makes it that one I want. Not to re-write it again.
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 12:57 am |
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Quoting lady in red: Quoting libralady: Quoting kai:
a gifted singer???? hahahahahaha you really need to hear me sing!!! I don't even sing infront of my partner....actuallly make that especially not infront of
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Partner? Does this mean you have moved out and now living with a man?? |
I think he's in US LL and kai is still in UK so I'm guessing 'no'
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Good guess LIR...there are other ways of talking to a person than face to face but even down the phone etc its a "NO WAY!"
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 12:58 am |
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Quoting robyn : Quoting lady in red: Quoting kai: I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm 'in love'! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me.......
If it was that important that you remember writing it after all these years - then surely you must remember what it was about and could therefore have a go at re-writing it. |
i agree, if it was lost since you were 11 how does aenimga know about it?:-S |
She doesn't, she just reminded me of it etc and then it became a subject.
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 12:59 am |
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Quoting kai: She doesn't, she just reminded me of it etc and then it became a subject. |
Yes
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 04:58 pm |
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Dear me, this seemed to turn into a bit of a pick on Kai thread here. Flippin hec, she only wanted to share a poem with us. Anyway, good on ya Kai for not letting anyone get to you.
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 05:22 pm |
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Quoting kai: Quoting robyn : Quoting lady in red: Quoting kai: I've been writing poetry for years not just recently because I'm 'in love'! I used to just mess around writing what came into my head, but then I wrote my first serious piece when I was 11, which unfortunatly I lost.
Well I know how to get hold of it but getting hold of it is the hard part and the worst thing is that it is really dear to me.......
If it was that important that you remember writing it after all these years - then surely you must remember what it was about and could therefore have a go at re-writing it. |
i agree, if it was lost since you were 11 how does aenimga know about it?:-S |
She doesn't, she just reminded me of it etc and then it became a subject. |
ah ok
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 08:47 pm |
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Quoting xkirstyx: Dear me, this seemed to turn into a bit of a pick on Kai thread here. Flippin hec, she only wanted to share a poem with us. Anyway, good on ya Kai for not letting anyone get to you. |
Thanks Kirsty
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 11:33 pm |
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Whew , there are so many ladies having their period today.
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 11:46 pm |
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Quoting mheart72: Whew , there are so many ladies having their period today. |
@ mheart
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 11:46 pm |
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Quoting mheart72: Whew , there are so many ladies having their period today. |
How observant of you
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28 Feb 2007 Wed 11:58 pm |
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Quoting libralady: Quoting mheart72: Whew , there are so many ladies having their period today. |
How observant of you |
...and I think there's a few men who are as well, judging by some of the other threads
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01 Mar 2007 Thu 12:24 am |
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Quoting reBooped: Quoting libralady: Quoting mheart72: Whew , there are so many ladies having their period today. |
How observant of you |
...and I think there's a few men who are as well, judging by some of the other threads |
They are having a "mid life crisis"
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