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Hopeless Love Poems - 4
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19 Apr 2007 Thu 03:23 am |
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Quoting Quasimodo: Actually I was going to ask you the same question since I saw no comment from you. How come you didn't reveal or point out the sexual or pornographic content in my poem!  |
not sexual this time, but grammatical errors... but then again, it might have been part of the 'plan', you never know with poetry  (of course only the amatourish one).
if you want to know my opinion, I didn't like this poem (I'm actually resisting to call it a poem), it's too simplistic, lacks depth. everybody can write something like this. Some of your other stuff was better  .
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19 Apr 2007 Thu 12:46 pm |
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Thank you for your comment on my poem. Highly appreciated.
So, this time would you like to read some other testimonials of my other stuff as well?  For example, of my singing arias? Of my sculptures? My paintings?
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19 Apr 2007 Thu 10:40 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo: So, this time would you like to read some other testimonials of my other stuff as well? For example, of my singing arias? Of my sculptures? My paintings? |
you're right... that wasn't the best choice . no, seriously, I meant that I liked some of the other 'artistic' stuff you were writing .
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20 Apr 2007 Fri 10:40 pm |
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I am a man of art and literature, so everything I say, write, make, do or create is naturally artistic.
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