merhaba. Please could someone translate this sms?

guzellikler, sen olsun merhaba mesaji aldim memnun oldum tesekur ederim. temmuzda mi izine geleceksin mansurla oylemi karar verdiniz? bizler iyiyiz havalar isindi mansur senin mesajini soyledim memnun oldu. ben bu haftada yogun calisiyorum, evinin elektrik arizasi icin tekrar gecmis olsun. sana ve ailene selamlar.

thank you to anyone who can help.

my try , maybe wait to check , but its the general idea

kindness/ beauty .. be as you may , hello i received the message , i was very happy , thankyou. is it in july you will come on vacation with mansur. really ? have you decided ?. we are good , the weather also , i told masur about your message he was very happy . this week i have had a lot of work , again for your houses electric problem gecmis olsun ((May you recover soon!/I´m sorry about your bad luck.)) and hello to you and your family

my try - Thanks for tyring Insallah.

I have tried but yours is better then mine!

Thank you for your both your message and hello.

Suggestion that Mansur is coming in July. Is really decision?

We are fine. Weather is warm.

Spoke with Mansur pleased with your message.

I am busy at work at present.

Hope your electric problem has been resolved.

Greeting to you and your family.

*** I think I like the other message best!!

Please could someone have a look at both attempts and let me know where I went wrong? Many thanks.

Thank you Caliptrix. Not sure now you have pointed out where I got "both" from! Both are translation are very similar in ways. Could native person have a look and translate pls? think Insallah's version is correct but I am learning and want to see where i went wrong in mine. Thanks.

lol how did i get involved with this ..he he i was trying to help but seems we are being compared for are answers (joking ;

received / got .. i mean the same thing

i never understand totally the meaning of olsun in sentences it seems to mean so much in different ways ..with different words

ahh ohh well i will continue to learn..

Know what you mean Insallah, I have a lot of learning still to do. Thanks for your efforts and I am sure that your translation is better then mine!

temmuzda mi izine geleceksin mansurla oylemi

Suggestion that Mansur is coming in July. (YOUR IDEA)

ok well i can try to show your error here as gelecek(SIN= YOU ) has to be you will come

and mansurLA (WITH ) is with mansur

so will be like = in july you will come to vacation with mansula

IF it was mansur will come in july it would be
temmuzda mansur geleckek