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 Dear Nisreen,  I think you are doing a great job.  And you obviously are helping a lot.  i just wanted to say that if you use the Turkish senence structure like

subject(who) + what, where, when + verb , then you translations will make more sense.  First try to analyse it in English.  Once you have the answers to who, when, where, how, what, then you can put them in order.