a poem (thank you)

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a poem (thank you)

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jade_jade
406 posts

30 Dec 2008 Tue 02:24 pm

edit....

Edited (2/24/2013) by jade_jade

Perfect
3 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 04:54 pm

It´s poem well.

lady in red
6947 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 05:19 pm

Sorry - double post

lady in red
6947 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 05:19 pm

Quoting jade_jade

Seni özlemek...
HerÃ¾eyden önce
Ve herÃ¾eyden sonra
yine seni özlemek...

hangi müzik uyar bilmem
ruhumun "sen haline"

hangi Ã¾iir yazÃ½lÃ½r bilmem
ruhumun "biz haline"

hangi sevgi doldurur bilmem
ruhlarÃ½mÃ½zÃ½n "eÃ¾ halini"

Çok uzaklardaki arkadaÃ¾Ã½ma

I´m guessing this is for translation - so I´m moving it!

harp00n
3993 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 05:41 pm

Quoting jade_jade

may be itwont be one to one but i ll try. Because tranlate a poem to another language getting hard.

Miss you

Before evreything

And after everything

Miss you again

Which music is proper

To my soul´s of "your case"

Which Poet can write

To my soul´s of " us case"

Which love can load

Our souls of "match case". i dont know

To my friend whom s/he so far away from me

Melek74
1506 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 05:44 pm

Quoting jade_jade

Seni özlemek...

Missing you ...
HerÃ¾eyden önce

Before anything else
Ve herÃ¾eyden sonra

And after everything else
yine seni özlemek...

Missing you anew ...

hangi müzik uyar bilmem

Which music fits, I know not
ruhumun "sen haline"
my soul´s "sen haline"

hangi Ã¾iir yazÃ½lÃ½r bilmem

In which poem is written, I know not
ruhumun "biz haline"

my soul´s "biz haline"

hangi sevgi doldurur bilmem

which love fills, I know not
ruhlarÃ½mÃ½zÃ½n "eÃ¾ halini"

our souls´ "eÃ¾ halini"

Çok uzaklardaki arkadaÃ¾Ã½ma

To my friend far away

My try, wait for corrections, as usual.

I don´t know how to translate the words in quotations marks, so I´ll leave them for somebody else to translate.

jade_jade
406 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 05:52 pm

thank you Melek. you are so kind

harp00n
3993 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 05:54 pm

Quoting Melek74

My try, wait for corrections, as usual.

I don´t know how to translate the words in quotations marks, so I´ll leave them for somebody else to translate.

yine = tekrar = again

Bilmem = bilmiyorum = i dont know

... haline = hal / durum = situation, case, opportunity

Melek74
1506 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 06:00 pm

Quoting harp00n

yine = tekrar = again

Bilmem = bilmiyorum = i dont know

... haline = hal / durum = situation, case, opportunity

Thank you harp00n ${#lang_emotions_flowers}$

In www.tureng.com it says yine can be translated also as afresh, anew, again, over, etc. I thought anew might sound more "poetic".

Thanks for the translation of hal, I wasn´t sure how to translate the expressions with it here ${#lang_emotions_bigsmile}$

10.

harp00n
3993 posts

10 Jan 2009 Sat 06:19 pm

u welcome. i hope i could help.

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