selm valeri nasýlsýn,canada da hayat nasýl ðidiyor,.sonunda askerliðim bitdi beni bekleyemediðin 460 ðün bitdi......kendine iyi bak.yazmak istedðiðin zman ben buradayým kapým açýk oldugunu unutma yeter.

my try

hi valeri , how are you ? how is life going ? at last my military service finished , the 460 days that i was waiting have ended, take care i wanted to write that i am here , my door is open. dont forget

(as in , you are welcome as a guest, his/het door is open for you )

Hi Valerie,how are you? How´s life going in Canada? At last my military service has ended. The 460 days you didn´t wait for me have come to an end. Take care. When you want to write I´m here,don´t forget that my door is open.

My try

 Hello Valerie, how are you ? How is life going in Canada ? Finally, my army serves has finished. 460 days which you wouldn´t wait me finished. Take care to yourself. Here i´m when you need. Do not forget my door is open for you. That´s enough.

my god

I think I went blind on this translation..didn´t see canada and ignored the negative (couldn´t ) oppps

Just shows how very tired I am....must get myself a drink

sorry all i haven´t seen your attempts

 maybe its

the 460 days that you couldnt wait for me have ended.

i havent seen "yazmak istediðin zaman" either and thanks for correction.

 nothing the idea is the same but it had eme in it

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