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yusuf and extra brain - part 1
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 03:42 am |
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oohhh  ... im claping... and im waiting part 2...
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 03:52 am |
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Ah, the first part of that was awesome! I can't wait for the rest...and good luck on your exam yusuf!!! I know you'll do great! 
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 10:57 am |
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Good luck Yusuf! I also cant wait for the rest of the poem
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 11:09 am |
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...AlphaF has to be careful...there is a poet running up for the number 1 place as coolest at tc...  ...can´t wait to hear the rest, lan!
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 11:44 am |
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yusuf .keep on the good work , but extra brain( do u have two brains)
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 12:48 pm |
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Great start Yusuf - look forward to the rest - your English is getting very good too!!
Best luck wishes for your final exam 
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 12:49 pm |
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Quoting Lyndie: Good luck Yusuf! I also cant wait for the rest of the poem |
thank u lyndie so much, realy i feel so so happy when send me post and giving me your opion 
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 01:32 pm |
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Quoting yusuf :
yusuf , yusuf and extra brain
if i share i always gain
what i do is not in vain
yusuf ,yusf and exta brain
yusuf yusuf and extra brain
turkeys love runs in my vein |
good start
but i think that
"...and an extra brain..." would sound much better.
also, love of turkey would sound better
and i dont think vein can be used like this, i thnk it would have to be plural
sorry, im guessing that english is not ur first language hehe..
great poem though, well done..
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23 Apr 2006 Sun 02:06 pm |
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oohhh yusuf i think that girls likes u here on tc,but is that because of ur poems or something else????????????????
what is ur secret casanova???
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