I translated a little more too. But you should know that nobody except sometimes me translates such long poems. Make them shorter. At most 16 lines or 4 verses. I like writing poems too. Once i was writing long poems. But then i realized simplicity and shortness makes poems more beautiful and effective. And it forces you to be more creative. Just an advice Have a nice day.

Thanks

I finished at last I made some modifications too. It is a very good  poem and very sad. See you.

Thank you so much dear gokuyum You`re truly a star, thank you so much for your never ending assistance