Merhaba,

I was try to translate this song ,I want to know is my translate is right or wrong

thanks in advance

Ben Nefes Alamam

Bu aşk böyle bitemez
Bırakma terketme beni (2*)
Atma beni ölümlere
Atma beni zulümlere
Götür beni gittiğin yere... (2*)

Ben sensiz nefes alamam
Buralarda hiç duramam
Tek başına yalnız kalamam
Senin kokunu özlerim
Hep yollarini gözlerim
Götur beni gittiğin yere... (2*)

Aşkındır beni yaşatan
Beni hayata bağlayan
Atma beni ölümlere(2*)
Atma beni zulümlere
Götür beni gittiğin yere...

In this way this love was finish

That love can not finish in this way.

About this round didnt stopped
I cant still alone

I cant stay in here without you

I cant stay alone

Thanks Harpoon

I have just seen them at first side

The others sentences is right or not right

I live for your love?

Its your love that/ which keeps me alive

 You are bind my life?

that connects me to life

The title should be

´I can´t breathe´ in stead of ´I can´t bearth´.

I think it should be:

I cant bearth without you                             I can´t breathe without you
About this round didnt stopped                      I can´t stop here
I cant still alone                                          I can´t stay alone
I miss your smell                                          I miss your smell
Every your roads my eyes                             My eyes always track you
Take me to where you go                             Take me where you go
I live from your love                                     I live from your love
You are bind my life                                     Take me where you are

 Hep yollarını gözlerim.

Here its not gözlerim = my eyes (göz: eye, gözler: eyes, gözlerim: my eyes)

but gözlerim = I watch/study/oversee (gözlemek: to watch, -er-: continuous tense, -im: I).

so gözlerim is a verb not a noun. this can be seen from the fact that the noun (yolların = your roads) takes the -ı ending.

Literal:

Always I watch your roads

Free:

I always watch where you go

I always watch whatever you do

I will always watch wherever you go