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Who has a good level of ENGLISH?
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02 Oct 2006 Mon 12:12 pm |
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How come you get to study Turkish at your college?
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02 Oct 2006 Mon 01:04 pm |
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Wow that brilliant, it's amazing what you can do when you have the drive and determination.
Well done thats truly inspiring.
and any helpful tips for learning you have would be greatfully appreciated!!
Good luck, I hope you get evertything you want!! 
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03 Oct 2006 Tue 08:43 pm |
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Quoting qdemir: Having read your essay and seen your talent I have to tell you that you have made a big mistake to drop English langugage and literature. Go and get it where you have dropped it  . You are very good at expressing, especially, your feelings. And also I am not surprised on seeing a long essay by you. Have you ever tried writing short stories? I think you should. |
No trust me, I really havent made a mistake there.. I felt as though I was getting absolutely NOWHERE inthe lesson..No one seems to be learning everythng.. I really miss Shakespeare to tell u the truth haha. We were only really doing transcripts n stuff  so boring...
And no, I have never really tried writing short stories... I dont know whether or not I could thnk of what to write about... hehe
But then if someone gives me somethng to write about then I can.. Anlybldnzmi bni bilmiom :S
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03 Oct 2006 Tue 08:45 pm |
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haha im not generally from basildon dear.. dont say that hehe 
and im glad u like the essay.. i really dont know if its suitble to enter for a Diploma though!!!!!
and my teacher was Cheryl.. the one who thnks shes funny hehe... it really makes it worse coz she so isnt...
and omg.. who the hell is the dwarf teacher hehe
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03 Oct 2006 Tue 08:46 pm |
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Quoting Hilliar: How come you get to study Turkish at your college? |
im only doing the exam through the college and i have to sort out my own work 
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03 Oct 2006 Tue 08:48 pm |
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Quoting paulad: Wow that brilliant, it's amazing what you can do when you have the drive and determination.
Well done thats truly inspiring.
and any helpful tips for learning you have would be greatfully appreciated!!
Good luck, I hope you get evertything you want!! |
hehe im so glad that everyone thnks its good... but to tell you all the truth i wanted u all to find the BAD PARTS in it...!!! i want to do a few redrafts before i submt it!!
and just keep using wht you have learnt so u dont forget it.. thats the main thng in learning another language i thnk
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04 Oct 2006 Wed 03:59 am |
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I know you want some constructive criticism, but I don't have any. It was wonderful. You are a fantastic writer. Not only did you paint wonderful pictures that the reader could put themselves into, but it was so heartfelt. You could also be a motivational speaker because after reading your essay, I want to work harder at learning the Turkish language, heck after reading your essay I just want to work harder at everything in my life.
Thank you for a great read. Best of luck. I can tell you will be a success at whatever you pursue!!
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04 Oct 2006 Wed 04:14 pm |
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Quoting lovebug: I know you want some constructive criticism, but I don't have any. It was wonderful. You are a fantastic writer. Not only did you paint wonderful pictures that the reader could put themselves into, but it was so heartfelt. You could also be a motivational speaker because after reading your essay, I want to work harder at learning the Turkish language, heck after reading your essay I just want to work harder at everything in my life.
Thank you for a great read. Best of luck. I can tell you will be a success at whatever you pursue!! |
haha are you serious.. little me really did that.. wow.. my heads gonna be so big im not gonna be able to get out of my front door hehe
THanks really
im guessing that there are a few thngs wrong though.. hence chantal's pm to me.. (i hope she doesnt mind me postng it here!)
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04 Oct 2006 Wed 04:18 pm |
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Quoting Chantal (By PM):
Hey!
I just read your essay, and it's amazingly interesting!
I'm not sure if you've had feedback yet (I'm too lazy to look up the right post ) . But I saw that you wrote that you were 14 in 2005.. and I think that should be 2004. (because later you're saying you went again one year later! ).
I also think there are some minor present/past-tense mistakes. but I'm not quite sure, basically since I'm not a native speaker!
Thanks for sharing this with us (me), and good luck with your Spanish!
xx
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MY BIRT DATE: 18 AUGUST 1990
AND...
i went in the autumn of 2003 when i had just turned 13.
and then in april 2005 when i was 14.
then in the summer of 05 i went when i was 14 and turned 15 when i was there.
did i get mixed up with my numbers :S:S
and if you can all have a look for these past/presenet tense mistakes, it would be great.. im sure that would have made me lose lots of marks! :S its lucky that you noticed chantal!!
and thanks... yeah.. spanish is going ok... i really enjoy it its not as hard as i thought it would be either... hehe
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...im preparing a list of improvements for u ..but ur essay is excellent..i love the phrases u use to convey ur feelings..truly outstandng hun 
