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Who has a good level of ENGLISH?
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07 Oct 2006 Sat 05:24 pm |
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aww.dont be downheartened hun..ur essay is great..but theres always room for improvement..nothing's perfect eh 
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07 Oct 2006 Sat 05:53 pm |
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well then i'll make sure i won't reply 
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07 Oct 2006 Sat 05:54 pm |
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yeh i like it..think it fits in well with how u discuss how your turkish was progressing in the next paragraph
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07 Oct 2006 Sat 05:58 pm |
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Quoting SuiGeneris: no no no!
if you say list the methods you used so much!
your assay turns into the shopping lists my mom does
describe the atmosphere the weather of colour... what the wind was whistling to your ears... show the difficulties as a dragon keeps the secret sword of language
such things looks much more literary |
Of course! You are so right!!
I think I need to get my creative shoes back on
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07 Oct 2006 Sat 06:03 pm |
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creative shoes will be no good ceyda hun..u need a creative cap on !
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07 Oct 2006 Sat 06:12 pm |
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Quoting robin01: creative shoes will be no good ceyda hun..u need a creative cap on ! |
no, ive just put on my creative knickers and have come out with quite a good part-of-a-paragrapgh see...
have a look have a look
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07 Oct 2006 Sat 06:21 pm |
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that is just beautiful ceyda hun.a pleasure to read
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07 Oct 2006 Sat 06:25 pm |
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Quoting robin01: that is just beautiful ceyda hun.a pleasure to read |
hehe thank you... so im nearly finished i think..
im just gonna add a few more "creative outburts" to give it a bit more of an "oomph factor" hehe..
and if you can be spotting my mis-use of past and present tense and then post them here i can be correcting those too..
i would then say that the piece is finished. what do you think?
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hehe just kidding, its ok.. nothing special..