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Who has a good level of ENGLISH?
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04 Oct 2006 Wed 04:50 pm |
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Quoting robin01: business studies human resources.. sacma incelemeler yani   |
hahaha... its all good all good aferin sana jnm xXx
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04 Oct 2006 Wed 05:31 pm |
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Quoting capoeira (By PM): Hi there!
Read your essay. It was good. I would only suggest that you add more about being an english teacher/instructor. How you propose to help people. I think it should say just a little more about that. Your personal experience is wonderful and it should just have a bit more details. Like some teaching methods you would use besides the post it notes. Also, what are your career goals as an instructor...besides teaching and helping others learn what do you want to do? travel as a teacher, learn more languages, have workshops to help other teachers improve. These are all important I think. Best wishes. |
Yes, adding more about being an English teacher is a good idea and I did even consider that when writing... The question though, does not ask about that so I was in two minds of whether or not I should write about it. I dont really want to go off subject and then lose marks but as you say, it may be good. What does everyone else think?
Hehe yeah, thats definitely right. I will add more methods which I used in learning Turkish and then will state how I could use those methods to teach. By the way, Im not planning to teach English only with post it notes hehehe I also wrote about Turkish TV didnt I..? You are right though.. I will add more... Very good point, THANKS!
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04 Oct 2006 Wed 05:36 pm |
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Quoting robin01 (By PM): for a start i have made some suggestions..and ceyda hun..all the way through u mix past and present tense..please choose which one u want..it is then easier to follow because it gets confusing when reading in depth darling..it is excellent though..newayz..my suggestions..
u said "i was a prisoner, captiev in my own ignorance, trying dubiously to tell how i felt" how about continuing this theme and saying i was a prisoner in my own ignorance, dying to by released from my linguistic constraints..
"no being"..noone is better in this sense..
"During my time there I would be in an environment of people who understand only Turkish for approximately four weeks,on my own"
this is confusing to follow hun..
u could say either.."during my time there, approximately four weeks, i would be on own, surrounded by people who speak only Turkish .."or "During my time in Turkey,approximately four weeks, i would be in a Turkish only environment.."
" I began to reunited." i began to be reunited..or i began to reunite..is correct.
"in oppose"..as opposed to is correct.. or in opposition..
"grammer" grammar is the correct spelling
"created a warm and affectionate feeling" how about it created a warmth and affectionate glow for those around me..
"delving into" in this sense it is misused..falling into sounds much better
"didn't seem so much"..didnt seem as much is better english
"self-will" self determination is a better word
i have more recently"..more recently, i have is better english
"then was the time" then came the time is better english hun
"at this time" at this point in time makes more grammatical sense
"i could"..i was able to sounds better..
these are just a few suggesions my head hurts after reading so much..im also not quite sure that u have covered the points that u need to sufficiently..but i will re-read soon with more suggestions etc..hope this helps |
very very veryyy much appreciated.. this is exactly what i wanted!!! most of what you said makes perfect sense to me.. there are a few parts which kinda change what i want to say though  hehe
anyway, let me try and find all pf these now.. i will edit them on my actual piece and try and put them in red ok.. if i can remember the html 
Thanks again... (looks like i remembered hehe)
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