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My first Turkish poem
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10.       janissary
0 posts
 07 Mar 2006 Tue 10:10 pm

what a nice poem

11.       Deli_kizin
6376 posts
 07 Mar 2006 Tue 11:35 pm

Ok thank you very much, I'll modify it straight away

It actually didn't take sooo long to write it, i guess half an hour.. because i felt like some sentences had been in my mind for some time already, really weird. Just waiting for the right time to be written down.

I'm glad you liked it

12.       Viktorija
46 posts
 25 Apr 2006 Tue 08:19 pm

woowww.. niceeee keep on smiling

13.       damalianti
84 posts
 25 Apr 2006 Tue 08:28 pm

Congratulations Deli_kizin for your poem and also for the courage to post it. It is really nice and I am impressed.

Sincerely

14.       oceanmavi
997 posts
 25 Apr 2006 Tue 08:45 pm

aw thanks for sharing that deli-kizin, thats a beautiful poem congratulations keep up the good work!

15.       carol.trky
165 posts
 25 Apr 2006 Tue 08:49 pm

16.       deli
5904 posts
 25 Apr 2006 Tue 11:51 pm

Everyone needs a good smile now and then. The best way to get a good smile yourself is in getting others around you to smile first.
evet cok gercek
smile and the world smiles with you
cry and you cry alone

17.       Deli_kizin
6376 posts
 26 Apr 2006 Wed 12:26 am

Thank you all

I had already almost forgotten about this poem
Once my exams are finished i will try to write more, though that would mostly be to practise my Turkish and not my poetical talent, as there isn't really any

Once again, thanks

18.       sanja_isyankar
457 posts
 26 Apr 2006 Wed 12:30 am

ur song is very good deli_kizin...i dont know to write poems and because of that,can i sing ...hehehe...i mean on ur poem...hmmm....

19.       Deli_kizin
6376 posts
 26 Apr 2006 Wed 12:31 am

Quoting deli:

Everyone needs a good smile now and then. The best way to get a good smile yourself is in getting others around you to smile first.
evet cok gercek
smile and the world smiles with you
cry and you cry alone



Well I'm smiling again. I got my exam-results back, and i have passed the school-exams with good grades. School-exams count 50% and the final exams are the other 50%. The finals are within 3 weeks, but now that i passed the first half with good results, i'm pretty sure i'll pass.
I feel a little less tensed and better, so I'm actually smiling again Today it was so sunny here and many classes
were cancelled. I sat in the grass with a book of Yaşar Kemal and listened my music. On my way home i went into town, bought a nice summerdress and celebrated my love with an ice-cream

20.       Deli_kizin
6376 posts
 26 Apr 2006 Wed 12:34 am

Quoting sanja_isyankar:

ur song is very good deli_kizin...i dont know to write poems and because of that,can i sing ...hehehe...i mean on ur poem...hmmm....



Go ahead Dinliyoruz

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