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Hopeless Love Poems-2
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 12:56 am |
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Quoting SuiGeneris: Quoting Quasimodo: Quoting SuiGeneris: Quoting Quasimodo:
15 March'07, Paris
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you are not in paris, are you?  |
Ask that question the demon of the void! Since he is expert in poetry, I guess he should be capable of telling if writing "Paris" under the poem reflects the reality or not! I am sorry I cannot say something of whether I was really in Paris or not.
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nevermind! i was just in a worry for people in Paris, since i got your answer, i think they are safe |
Don't be sure that much till reading what the demon of the void, as an expert in the subject, say about it. Since he is expert, he can parse anything in or related to the poem!
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 01:13 am |
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Quoting Quasimodo: Quoting SuiGeneris: Quoting Quasimodo:
15 March'07, Paris |
you are not in paris, are you? |
Ask that question the demon of the void! Since he is expert in poetry, I guess he should be capable of telling if writing "Paris" under the poem reflects the reality or not! I am sorry I cannot say something of whether I was really in Paris or not.
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why are you getting so defensive cyrano? you asked for comments, or did you mean compliments? every poet has to be able to tolerate criticism and hopefully learn from it, but you instead try to prove everyone wrong who doesn't like your poems! come on... decide what you want.
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 01:14 am |
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You missed wind... for example:
she is raining-I am getting wet
she is shining-I am sweating
she is blowing-I am going naked
she is snowing-I am feeling cold
Or whatever...
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 01:48 am |
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Quoting catwoman:
why are you getting so defensive cyrano? you asked for comments, or did you mean compliments? every poet has to be able to tolerate criticism and hopefully learn from it, but you instead try to prove everyone wrong who doesn't like your poems! come on... decide what you want. |
Hey- but I thanked each of you for your comments, didn't I? And I wrote my opinions on your comments- that's all! And I don't seek to receive nice always comments or compliments. That's why at the outset I said comments of any kind are welcome.
Thank you again.
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 01:52 am |
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Quoting duda: You missed wind... for example:
she is blowing-I am going naked
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Hmmm.. I am not sure... But consider a tree goes naked when its leaves fall in the autumn. However, let's wait and see what the demon of the void, the expert of the subject, will say!
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 03:19 am |
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Or a beggar with only a few garments... Or something like this:
Blow, Bugle, blow
THE splendour falls on castle walls
And snowy summits old in story:
The long light shakes across the lakes,
And the wild cataract leaps in glory.
Blow, bugle, blow, set the wild echoes flying,
Blow, bugle; answer, echoes, dying, dying, dying.
O hark, O hear! how thin and clear,
And thinner, clearer, farther going!
O sweet and far from cliff and scar
The horns of Elfland faintly blowing!
Blow, let us hear the purple glens replying:
Blow, bugle; answer, echoes, dying, dying, dying.
O love, they die in yon rich sky,
They faint on hill or field or river:
Our echoes roll from soul to soul,
And grow for ever and for ever.
Blow, bugle, blow, set the wild echoes flying,
And answer, echoes, answer, dying, dying, dying.
Alfred, Lord Tennyson
Anyway, nothing like what girls maybe thought.
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 04:15 am |
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It is all nice but are you sure it is, whether hopeless or hopeful, a love poem?
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 06:57 pm |
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Love is hopeless... poems are hope itself.
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 06:58 pm |
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Quoting duda: Love is hopeless... poems are hope itself. |
very beautifully and poetically put 
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 07:01 pm |
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 08:16 pm |
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Quoting robyn :
very beautifully and poetically put |
So, robyn, won't you comment on my poem? Just confess you like it very much, no?
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