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Hopeless Love Poems-2
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 03:10 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo: Quoting libralady: Actually, I think "Hopeless" just about sums it up!!  |
Uhmm... I would prefer to wait and see the demond of the void's approach to the function of "Hopeless" there since it is he who is the only expert of poetry around here and thus capable of indicating the function of it.
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lost, forlorn, having no hope.................... courtesy the English dictionary
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 06:47 pm |
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Quoting libralady: Quoting Quasimodo: Quoting libralady: Actually, I think "Hopeless" just about sums it up!! |
Uhmm... I would prefer to wait and see the demond of the void's approach to the function of "Hopeless" there since it is he who is the only expert of poetry around here and thus capable of indicating the function of it.
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lost, forlorn, having no hope.................... courtesy the English dictionary |
No doubt, it refers to them. But you know mostly dictionaries follow authors and poets like me, not vice versa! Hehe! Here is a pleasant aspect of being a poet!
Ehi!
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 08:17 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo: four season ballad
she is raining-I am getting wet
she is shining-I am sweating
she is falling-I am going naked
she is snowing-I am feeling cold
15 March'07, Paris
Comments of any kind are welcome! |
i didnt find ur poem rude,cause it just expression of feelings but i understand why ppl here see sexual conotation,but sexual feelings are part of love too..who doesnt have them!
reading first time this poem i just saw pictures like in some neonadrealism movie,it is simple poem and u can undestand her in diffrent meanings..but thats why art,poetry exist!
bonne nuit a Paris
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 08:40 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo: Thank you for your kind(!) comments.
nautilis- you got the point. I am indeed obbsessed by her, about which I have no complaint. So, I am actually the one who should be left free.
melnceyhun- I am sorry but I must disagree with you. From where and how have you come to a conclusion that my poem sounds rude? It can sound anything but rude. And I won't mention I am exalting her in my above poem.
Andddd catwoman (hehe!)- I would have been surprised if you hadn't found my poem sexist! So, I try to hide sexual meanings by playing with words, eh? You made me laugh out loud here. And what should it be said about I express my sexual anxieties? I assure you sexuality would be the last point that might have come to my mind when writing my poem. But, while on the subject, I think, I'd better to announce that I write also erotic poems- the poems that look like what you saw in my above one. They are currently on their way and you will soon attain the honour to read them.
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 09:56 pm |
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Quoting lunila:
i didnt find ur poem rude,cause it just expression of feelings but i understand why ppl here see sexual conotation,but sexual feelings are part of love too..who doesnt have them!
reading first time this poem i just saw pictures like in some neonadrealism movie,it is simple poem and u can undestand her in diffrent meanings..but thats why art,poetry exist!
bonne nuit a Paris |
lunila - I do like your approach to poetry so much. I can't do more than to agree with what you told about poetry. It appears we have the same view and taste concerning poetry. And you seems to be the girl for whom I have been looking for ages. Marry me?
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 10:04 pm |
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Quoting melnceyhun:
ow well, it sounded like that to me, but i didnt quite understood the poem, sorry |
What? You didn't quite understand my poem? What do you mean? That in my poetry I use an unintelligible and excessive language? The language that very few could understand? No, my friend, in my poetry I do use a Liverpoolian dock worker's language, a Londonian waitress' language, a Chicagoian taxi driver's language, a New Yorkian prostitute's language; in short, I use the people's language, the real English.
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 10:38 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo: Quoting lunila:
i didnt find ur poem rude,cause it just expression of feelings but i understand why ppl here see sexual conotation,but sexual feelings are part of love too..who doesnt have them!
reading first time this poem i just saw pictures like in some neonadrealism movie,it is simple poem and u can undestand her in diffrent meanings..but thats why art,poetry exist!
bonne nuit a Paris |
lunila - I do like your approach to poetry so much. I can't do more than to agree with what you told about poetry. It appears we have the same view and taste concerning poetry. And you seems to be the girl for whom I have been looking for ages. Marry me? |
yeah..marrie u?u still didnt bought me with ur poetry!show me more 
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 11:41 pm |
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Quoting lunila:
yeah..marrie u?u still didnt bought me with ur poetry!show me more |
But...but... you already took me with your approach to poetry! I think we both have looked for each other, and now, thanks God, found each other. Let's marry, lunila! This is my first proposal to you. Please be adviced that there are so many girls, at that very beautiful girls, at this site from all over the world who have a call to marry me; but for some reason I chose you!
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 12:22 am |
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Quoting Quasimodo: Quoting lunila:
yeah..marrie u?u still didnt bought me with ur poetry!show me more |
But...but... you already took me with your approach to poetry! I think we both have looked for each other, and now, thanks God, found each other. Let's marry, lunila! This is my first proposal to you. Please be adviced that there are so many girls, at that very beautiful girls, at this site from all over the world who have a call to marry me; but for some reason I chose you! |
yeah..a quasimodo look guy..no way  i am not esmeralda liking ur poetry doesnt means i like u so this is ur first proparsal,how manny u will give them to me??
show us more of ur poems
kendine iyi bak 
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 01:10 am |
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Quoting lunila: how manny u will give them to me??
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Till you accept my proposal! and here is the second one:
Would you like to marry me?
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19 Mar 2007 Mon 02:32 am |
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'she' is the weather, the season. 'I' am the earth: the flower, the humidity rising, the tree, etc. I dont find any sexual connotation in the poem as the title justifies what it is about. it would be up to the person reading to decide if it is sexual or not. peace
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