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Hopeless Love Poems-2
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 08:16 pm |
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Quoting robyn  :
very beautifully and poetically put  |
So, robyn, won't you comment on my poem? Just confess you like it very much, no?
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 10:08 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo: Quoting robyn :
very beautifully and poetically put |
So, robyn, won't you comment on my poem? Just confess you like it very much, no?
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erm... no  but it's very succinct.bravo 
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 10:35 pm |
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Confess it, Robyn. You like it very much. Don't fear, Robyn, just confess it like you make confessions to a father in a church. Don't ever fear! Take me as your father!
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 10:39 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo:
Confess it, Robyn. You like it very much. Don't fear, Robyn, just confess it like you make confessions to a father in a church. Don't ever fear! Take me as your father!
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yes u've got me,it was the best poem i've ever read in my life
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 10:44 pm |
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Quoting robyn : Quoting Quasimodo:
Confess it, Robyn. You like it very much. Don't fear, Robyn, just confess it like you make confessions to a father in a church. Don't ever fear! Take me as your father!
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yes u've got me,it was the best poem i've ever read in my life |
Good girl, Robyn! One of your sins is about to be forgiven. To make it totally forgive, you should also go to a church and make the confession to the father that you avoided at first confessing you like my poem very much and ask him to forgive you. Sorry I have no authority, since I am no father, to do it.
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 10:47 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo:
Good girl, Robyn! One of your sins is about to be forgiven. To make it totally forgive, you should also go to a church and make the confession to the father that you avoided at first confessing you like my poem very much and ask him to forgive you. Sorry I have no authority, since I am no father, to do it.
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seeing as god knows all and im not catholic i guess theres no need huh?
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16 Mar 2007 Fri 11:27 pm |
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But I am a Catholic and you, according to my belief, should go to a church and confess it as you committed a sin against me who am a Catholic. I am sorry for such inconvenience, but you shouldn't have involved in this thread! 
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17 Mar 2007 Sat 01:42 am |
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Quoting Quasimodo: But I am a Catholic and you, according to my belief, should go to a church and confess it as you committed a sin against me who am a Catholic. I am sorry for such inconvenience, but you shouldn't have involved in this thread! |
and im sorry but i shant comform to your ideals. they are yours and not mine
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17 Mar 2007 Sat 05:28 pm |
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Actually, I think "Hopeless" just about sums it up!! 
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17 Mar 2007 Sat 06:14 pm |
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Quoting libralady: Actually, I think "Hopeless" just about sums it up!! |
Uhmm... I would prefer to wait and see the demond of the void's approach to the function of "Hopeless" there since it is he who is the only expert of poetry around here and thus capable of indicating the function of it.
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18 Mar 2007 Sun 03:10 pm |
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Quoting Quasimodo: Quoting libralady: Actually, I think "Hopeless" just about sums it up!! |
Uhmm... I would prefer to wait and see the demond of the void's approach to the function of "Hopeless" there since it is he who is the only expert of poetry around here and thus capable of indicating the function of it.
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lost, forlorn, having no hope.................... courtesy the English dictionary
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