Umraniye´ye gitmek istiyorum is a perfect translation.

Just more used to taxi driver is gideceðim...Umraniye´ye gideceðim.

Taxi driver would also ask nereye gideceksiniz ? (where are you going)

and not nereye gitmek istiyorsunuz.

Anyway this is my experience but your way to say is actually more polite

Ýt isnt used much in Turkey anyway not by speaking maybe by writing Ý dont know.

For very much its more common to use ´çok fazla´ or when you want to say for example the food is very nice, then you can use a stonger word as ´lezzetli´ (delicious).

Dün evime geleceðini sandým fakat gelmedin.

Thank you Toggle

 Sorry just saw your message after posting mine.

Your translation is also correct only you have to turn beraber and yine

o zaman yine beraber olacagiz aþkim

Fakat sadece 10 gün kaldý, ondan sonra tekrar beraber olacaðýz aþkým.

You are at the right way. But i think it has to be like this:

Seni sadece yýldýzlarda yürüdüðümzden hatýrlamak istiyorum

Birlikte geçirdiðimiz güzel zamanýnda.

Thank you Mltm, i am always working to make my Turkish better i hope inþAllah one day i will write and speak the language fluently

Thank you for the compliment, i am not Turkish, i just know it well. I am living in Turkey with my Turkish husband. I just have to better my gramer.

Thank you Toggle.

Last one was a mistake by writing fast, other ones i was already doubting about if it was going to be olmamayý or olmamak and ikimize or ikimiz için.