Lütfen help me to understand something - correct my english too if necessary

how it is in turkish:

1. I can still see myself in the little house of my childhood where I lived unforgettable moments.

2. I can still see myself in my grandparents´ house where I lived since I was born.

3.I can still see myself in my grandparents´ quiet house where I lived till I gone to Istanbul.

4. You can´t imagine the poverty and the lack of hope of the village where he was born and that he left when he was 16 years old.

5. You can´t imagine the poverty and the isolation of the village that he left as soon as he could. 

6. You hadn´t seen the miserable and isolated village that I visited before I came to you.

    I hope I didn´t exaggerate...

The first one ;

1. I can still see myself in the little house of my childhood where I lived unforgettable moments.

Let´s partake the sentence into two part ;

I can still see myself --> Kendimi hala görebiliyorum

in the little house of my childhood where I lived unforgettable moments.

Unutulmaz anılar yaşadığım çocukluğumun küçük evinde

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So the whole sentence would be ;

Kendimi hala unutulmaz anılar yaşadığım çocukluğumun küçük evinde görebiliyorum.

2. I can still see myself  in my grandparents´ house where I lived since I was born.

Kendimi hala doğduğumdan beri  yaşadığım  dedemlerin evinde görebiliyorum.

3.I can still see myself  in my grandparents´ quiet house where I lived till I gone to Istanbul.

Kendimi hala İstanbul´a gidene kadar  yaşadığım  dedemlerin sakin evinde görebiliyorum.

You can´t imagine the poverty and the lack of hope of the village where he was born and that he left when he was 16 years old.

Doğduğu ve 16 yaşına geldiğinde terk ettiği köydeki umutsuzluğu ve yoksulluğu  hayal [bile] edemezsin[iz].

You can´t imagine the poverty and the isolation of the village that he left as soon as he could.

 İlk fırsatta terk ettiği  köydeki soyutlanmışlığı ve yoksulluğu  hayal [bile] edemezsin[iz]

Or ;

İlk fırsatta terk ettiği  köyün soyutlanmışlığı ve yoksulluğunu  hayal [bile] edemezsin[iz]

You hadn´t seen the miserable and isolated village that I visited before I came to you.

Size [sana] gelmeden önce ziyaret ettiğim sefil ve soyutlanmış köyü görmedin[iz].

It is more that I could hope for... Having you here is a wonderful thing, Tunci !

Bu umut ettiğimden daha fazladır. Bu sitede olduğun harika bir şey, bunun için çok teşekkür ederim. 

Sorry, I posted to the wrong place.