Pls could someone check my attempt from e to t? Many thanks

Hello, Thanks for your message,
Mesaji Icin teşekkürler, Hasan Merhaba

I have tried to speak to (name) about their leave. Do you know if he has got permission yet?
henüz müsaade almak egero senin var mı?. Caymak Onun Orada (name) Konusmake Denemek Ben

I would like to come to Ankara with (Name) if you don’t mind? I would like to see you all.
hepsi sen görmeke rica ediyorum .kesin olarak bilmek, (name)la Ankara’e Cabuke kesin olarak bilmek

Hope work calm down for you.
Sen Icin Yatıştırmak Çalışmak ümit etmek,

Busy with college – exam and homework to complete for Thursday. perşembe Icin Tame ev ödevi Ve muayene ,üniversiteli yogun

Wishing you and your family good days.
IYI günler AILNE SENIN VE SEN dileyerek

Understand that this was not good translation. (it lost me abit!)I would be grateful if someone could translate this amended version?
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Sorry about last message.

I have tried to speak to Mansur about when he is going to take leave. Do you know when?

I would like to come to Ankara with Mansur. Would this be ok with you and your family? It would be nice to see you all again.

I hope work not so busy for you.

I am busy with college. Last exam on Thursday.

Please say hi to the rest of your family.

Take care.

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Many thanks to whoever could assist.

perfect lir

you re doing great i would like to hear you when you re speaking Turkish...

plus me excellent you have been studying hard cuty aferin sana

you put me to shame girl
you are the most sucessful at learnig turkish in my opinion ,slow but sure well done city

Thanks deli - but writing it with a dictionary at my side is still easier than speaking it - oh well, I'll get there in the end I hope. Anyway, thanks very much for the encouragement (btw I see you still can't type )

Love from cuty

go lir goooooooo....

Thank you SO much Lady in Red - you are a star You are doing really well and inspiration to me! You put me to shame. Many thanks again.