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This Racist Place
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 12:16 am |
its all good.. till the last line.. i couldnt find a word that ryhmed with it hehe so u have to kind of read the last word with a suffolk accent to make it work hehe
This Racist Place
I’m so sick of this racist place,
Maybe you can tell by the look on my face,
The teachers, the students are all the same,
They’re proud of who they are, where’s the shame?
Everyday I’m living this hell,
I’m not sure if others can tell,
Because I’m different and proud to be,
I’m detested and laughed at; Oh God! Why me?
Maybe I’m just a normal person,
But I don’t deserve this pointless cursin’.
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 12:39 am |
Ceyda - wonderful poem, but you worry me. Is that written with personal experience? Where do you live honey?
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 12:42 am |
Quoting Aenigma: Ceyda - wonderful poem, but you worry me. Is that written with personal experience? Where do you live honey? |
Laindon
yeah.. all my poems are personal experience poems...
maybe ud like to read my poem on laindon too hehe
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 12:52 am |
Really, Laindon eh? Why am I always finding more reasons to be ashamed of being English...?
OK lets just make it clear.....
EVERYBODY - DONT GO TO LAINDON, HORRIBLE PLACE, STAY AWAY!
Hmmm, we have no problems like that here....I am really ashamed to hear that .
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 12:59 am |
Quoting Aenigma: Really, Laindon eh? Why am I always finding more reasons to be ashamed of being English...?
OK lets just make it clear.....
EVERYBODY - DONT GO TO LAINDON, HORRIBLE PLACE, STAY AWAY!
Hmmm, we have no problems like that here....I am really ashamed to hear that . |
ahh u made me feel guilty now hehe
anyway, thanks for ur comments
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 01:09 am |
Quote: aenigma and miss armut |
u two thanks for this ...and miss c hehe u proved that u r not a BOŞ girl hahah
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 01:12 am |
Quoting ramayan:
u two thanks for this ...and miss c hehe u proved that u r not a BOŞ girl hahah
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totaly agree with you,dude.
çarşamba geliyom,yer açın evde.
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 01:13 am |
Quoting goner: Quoting ramayan:
u two thanks for this ...and miss c hehe u proved that u r not a BOŞ girl hahah
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totaly agree with you,dude.
çarşamba geliyom,yer açın evde. |
Hmm i do hope you two don't mean it actually took her 2000 posts to proove she's not an empty lady!
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 01:15 am |
hehe miss_dolu ha
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25 Apr 2006 Tue 01:15 am |
Wow
Good job Ceyda..
i like it
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28 Apr 2006 Fri 08:37 pm |
Quoting miss_ceyda: its all good.. till the last line.. i couldnt find a word that ryhmed with it hehe so u have to kind of read the last word with a suffolk accent to make it work hehe
I’m so sick of this racist place,
.....
Maybe I’m just a normal person,
But I don’t deserve this pointless cursin’.
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alphaf has suggested that i use the word "arson" for the last word.. what do you guys think?
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29 Apr 2006 Sat 02:57 pm |
joey also suggests "question" to be the last word..
what do u guys think????
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29 Apr 2006 Sat 06:35 pm |
I think AlphaF's suggestion is much better...
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29 Apr 2006 Sat 07:05 pm |
As someone who lives in the next county it makes complete sense to me!!
You say person like "purson" so it rhymes with "cursin"
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29 Apr 2006 Sat 07:20 pm |
so should i change it or not?
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30 Apr 2006 Sun 10:03 pm |
Quote:
This Racist Place
I’m so sick of this racist place,
Maybe you can tell by the look on my face,
The teachers, the students are all the same,
They’re proud of who they are, where’s the shame?
Everyday I’m living this hell,
I’m not sure if others can tell,
Because I’m different and proud to be,
I’m detested and laughed at; Oh God! Why me?
Maybe I’m just a normal person,
But I don’t deserve this pointless cursin’.
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How about finishing it like this?
Under this skin i'm just the same,
so lets end this pointless game
but otherwise leave it!!
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