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T to E please SEVDA BİR ATEŞ BULDU SENDE Edip CANSEVER
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10.       Henry
2604 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 02:06 am

Arrrgh {#emotions_dlg.sad}  So should it be

Ve sevimsiz bir terlik gibi duran odan

 

And your room lingers/remains like an unloved slipper???

sevimsiz = unloveable, unlovely I don´t think is used in English, lovely = beautiful, güzel, unlovely = ugly, çirkin

11.       scalpel
1472 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 02:07 am

 

Quoting Laila65

SEVDA BİR ATEŞ BULDU SENDE
...

Sonra bir pencereden kendine
Ayışığı gibi vuran sen
Ne sana ne başkasına benziyor.

Ve işte bir dip balığı su boşluğunda
Çırparaktan yüzgeçlerini
Hiç kimseye uymayan bir mevsim öneriyor

Edip CANSEVER

 

Then you -who falls on himself

like a moonlight through a window-

are not like yourself nor somebody else.

 

And finally a bottom fish flapping its fins

in a water gap

suggests a season that fits nobody.

 

(goku, henry ya ettik içine şiirin {#emotions_dlg.confused} ya da harika bir iş çıkarttık! {#emotions_dlg.bigsmile} 



Edited (1/13/2011) by scalpel

12.       gokuyum
5050 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 02:10 am

 

Quoting Henry

Arrrgh {#emotions_dlg.sad}  So should it be

Ve sevimsiz bir terlik gibi duran odan

 

And your room lingers/remains like an unloved slipper???

sevimsiz = unloveable, unlovely I don´t think is used in English, lovely = beautiful, güzel, unlovely = ugly, çirkin

 

Henry " durmak" here means " to resemble", "to look like"

Thank you for your information, I will correct it.



Edited (1/13/2011) by gokuyum

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13.       gokuyum
5050 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 02:12 am

 

Quoting scalpel

 

 

Then you -who falls on himself

like a moonlight through a window-

are not like yourself nor somebody else.

 

And finally a bottom fish flapping its fins

in a water gap

suggests a season that fits nobody.

 

(goku, henry ya ettik içine şiirin {#emotions_dlg.confused} ya da harika bir iş çıkarttık! {#emotions_dlg.bigsmile} 

I am sure Henry will make the translation more beautiful.

 

14.       Henry
2604 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 02:15 am

I think Marion is the best person to correct the English and keep the ´feel´ of the poem.



Edited (1/13/2011) by Henry

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15.       deli
5904 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 10:41 am

Well done Henry you are one clever dude

16.       vineyards
1954 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 10:53 am

Sonra bir pencereden kendine
Ayışığı gibi vuran sen
Ne sana ne başkasına benziyor.

 

and you -reflecting on yourself

like the moonlight through the window-

don´t resemble yourself or any other person




Edited (1/13/2011) by vineyards

17.       Laila65
16 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 11:48 am

Thank you all for translating this poem for me! {#emotions_dlg.bigsmile}

18.       scalpel
1472 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 01:22 pm

 

Quoting deli

Well done Henry you are one clever dude

 

..hani bana, hani bana Cry

19.       deli
5904 posts
 13 Jan 2011 Thu 05:48 pm

and you and you

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