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Thread: i love turkey more than so much

701.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 24 Apr 2006 Mon 11:51 pm

i have only the turkish flag on the door of my room.. although i think that what is in the heart is most important.. its what u feel and not what you own (material items).. right lyndie?



Thread: Laindon

702.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 24 Apr 2006 Mon 11:49 pm

Quoting Lyndie:

You should never try to improve what flows from the heart! İt wıll never have the same passion if you try to make somethıng 'better' for the sake of it. Leave it! İt says what you feel and that is what poetry should be like (well in my opinion anyway)



thats a darn good point ya know.. i was thinking though that if i become a famous poet hihi.. and people study my poems.. they are gonna say "well it ryhmes so its actually quite upbeat" and its not.. or maybe the fact that it ryhmes could show that its something which is constantly happening, like the ryhtm of the poem.. i dont know!! :S



Thread: Laindon

703.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 24 Apr 2006 Mon 09:09 pm

hahaha.. i cant believe you have actually heard of this place..??

hehe anyway, are there any ways i could improve the poem?



Thread: Laindon

704.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 23 Apr 2006 Sun 10:07 pm

a poem i wrote about where i live..
as can be imagined, this didnt go down too well with the people at school who have been born and bred here hehe oh well

Laindon

The trees are blowing side by side,
But the life around here has already died,
The sun is shining; the grass is green,
But living around here is just obscene,
Children are playing; the sky is blue,
But it does not change the terrible view,
As I see it this place is grey,
And it’s getting worse day by day,
The people here are all the same,
If it’s not their fault then who’s to blame?
There are no flowers; the birds don’t sing,
It’s always the same whether autumn or spring,
There’s always that feeling hung in the air,
That strange unhappiness that’s ever so rare,
The people here are worse than low,
But what can I say? It’s all they know,
Everyone has that terrible sneer,
But what do you expect? They come from here,
Living here is such a con,
But it’s the best it gets; this is Laindon.



Thread: War, Whats it Good For?

705.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 23 Apr 2006 Sun 10:01 pm

Quoting Lyndie:

I know. I am really so sorry about this Miss C. I didn't realise it was just your forum. I thought it was just a general poetry forum. Only after I posted did I see what I had done and I haven't any Evil Moderator powers on this particular forum so I couldn't move or delete my post.


I hope you forgive me. I would never do such an awful thing of purpose.

And...as to whether it is real or not, don't you know emotional poems can only be written from experience.



hehe ayy lyndie yaff.. çok seviom sni
no grudges ha :@ hehe



Thread: TURKISH SIM CARD

706.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 23 Apr 2006 Sun 09:52 pm

generally 2 months....??



Thread: War, Whats it Good For?

707.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 23 Apr 2006 Sun 09:42 pm

Quoting Lyndie:

I am a little shy about this because I never posted any poetry before. Here is a poem I wrote some time ago and the only person who ever saw it before was me.
BUT
I am inspired by everyone, so here goes....
.................



great poem, you have gone into such detail its like this is really a true experience...? öyle mi??

anyway, great poem like i said,, its a shame that you had to steal my limelight though!! :@ hehe



Thread: War, Whats it Good For?

708.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 23 Apr 2006 Sun 09:39 pm

Quoting Lyndie:

Bravo Miss Princess.
What a lovely poem another little talent you have hidden away I see.



hehe you really do make me out to be more than i am



Thread: War, Whats it Good For?

709.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 23 Apr 2006 Sun 09:38 pm

Quoting ramayan:

Quote:

miss-armut



aferin kız sana...bazen senin gerçekten dolu biri olduğunu düşÃ¼nmek istiyorum...heheh elimde değil...gerçek bu... hehehe



ahh boş değilim artık ha ne güsel



Thread: yusuf and extra brain - part 1

710.       miss_ceyda
2627 posts
 23 Apr 2006 Sun 01:32 pm

Quoting yusuf :


yusuf , yusuf and extra brain
if i share i always gain
what i do is not in vain
yusuf ,yusf and exta brain

yusuf yusuf and extra brain
turkeys love runs in my vein



good start
but i think that

"...and an extra brain..." would sound much better.


also, love of turkey would sound better

and i dont think vein can be used like this, i thnk it would have to be plural



sorry, im guessing that english is not ur first language hehe..
great poem though, well done..



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