Could you please give me a good translation Thankyou very much.

Ben bal arýsý gibiydim senden önce 
Bak pervanelere döndum seni görünce

Yana yana kül olsam her an
Yine de senden ayrýlamam
Yoluna adadým ömrümü ben
Sensiz olamam 
Yana yana kül olsam her an
Yine de senden ayrýlamam
Bin yýl yaþasam yine sana doyamam

Sana gönlümü verdim nazlý güzel 
Seni almazsam gözlerim açýk gider 

Bana ellerini ver 
Hayat seni sevince güzel 
Yoluna adadým ömrümü ben 
Gel kaçma güzel

Bana ellerini ver
Hayat seni sevince güzel 
Sana gönlümü verdim nazlý güzel...

Oh dear god!  Would someone PLEASE give prym a good translation!!!!!!!! 

well.

I was told that mine are BED, very BED!! So I am going to pass on this..

Ben bal arýsý gibiydim senden önce 
Bak pervanelere döndum seni görünce

Come on folks or s/he´ll keep posting - everybody does 2 lines. Here are mine:

I was like bee´s honey before you

Look, I turned into a moth when I saw you

- please notice how the rhyme is preserved in my translation.

Next one, please

Now my mothy wings have become frail & weak

I´m afraid I soon won´t be able to speak

Yoluna adadým ömrümü ben
Sensiz olamam

I dedicated my life to you

without you i can´t exist.

Bin yýl yaþasam yine sana doyamam
Sana gönlümü verdim nazlý güzel 

If I were to live a thousand years, I couldn´t get my fill of you.

I gave my heart to you, coy and beautiful

Is it me, or is this starting to sound like Rupert Bear rhyming couplets?

 Come on...your suppose to translate two lines here...poor Pryme needs this translation.

Hi Well thanks to everybody for collective translation I don´t know if you are sarcastic or not But I need good translation because mine is not good. I guess I should have said better translation than mine. I believe yours will be better than mine because anytime I try to translate something that I really want I mess up. Any help will be apprecaited a lot. I already did

Don´t pass I know your translations who told you they are bad? They are jeolous of  you ha ha please keep translate. (in general)

And ths week´s Post of the Week Award goes to...TEASCHIP!!!

will you help me or should I give up?

You´re a native Turkish speaker and have a good command of English. Post your version and people will correct your mistakes if there are any

Well I thought that option too but I wouldn´t dare because there is lots of words in English that I don´t know Ok  lets try

I was like honey-bee before I met you

look I turned pervane (? I don´t know what is in English)when I saw you

Even I  burn and turn ashes

Again I can not leave you

I dedicate my life to you

I can´t be (or live?) without you

Even I live thousands years

I can not get enough you (loving you??)

I gave you my heart beuty

Ýf I don´t take you.....

Seni almazsam gözlerim açýk gider (according to one of my English teacher there must be an experssion in English for this but I don´t know)

Give me your hands

Life is more beautiful when I love you

I dedicate my life to you

Come don´t run away beuty

pervane = moth (kelebek gibi)

Any other suggestion, correction??? Please.

 I´ve tried for you:

I was like a honey-bee before I met you

Look, I turned into a moth when I saw you

Even if I burn and turn ashes

Still I cannot leave you

I dedicate my life to you

I can´t be (or live?) without you

Even if I live a thousand years

I cannot get enough of you

I gave you my heart beauty

Ýf I don´t take you.....

Seni almazsam gözlerim açýk gider (according to one of my English teacher there must be an experssion in English for this but I don´t know)(‘my eyes go hungry’? – can’t think of an English expression for this - sorry)

Give me your hands

Life is more beautiful when I love you

I dedicate my life (heart?) to you

Come, don´t run away beauty

Thankyou very very much I knew that I made lots of mistakes thanks for helping me.

this is my try..

I was like a honey bee before you
But I become  a moth since I saw you

Though I become ashes from burning every moment
Still, I can not leave you
I dedicated my life to your path
I can not live without you
Though I become ashes from burning every moment
Still, I can not leave you
Even if I live for a thousand year
I can not get enough of you

I have given you my heart, you delicate beauty
If i dont have you, I will die unfulfilled

give me your hands
life is beautiful when loving you
I dedicated my life to your path
come, dont run away beauty


give me your hands
life is beautiful when loving you
I gave my life to you, delicate beauty

 Well yours is obviously better but I was only trying to correct the English a bit!

Thankyou very much both of you .