when I said that I can't love anyone that much you have turned everything upside down! how can I explain to you that wherever your hand touches it burns, how can I explain to you that you've got stuck in my mind just like in my heart... I love you

yanlız ben miyim? yoksa kötü bir insan mıyım?

well, you ARE a smart student, those were only some minor corrections

wish nobody loves me, whoever loves me, whom I love offend and hurt me, I want to leave this world whoever comes hurts me, I have no strength left any more, please don't love

büyük çocuk/ küçük çocuk- the big (older) child/ the small (younger) child
altın kapı değerli- the golden door is valuable
iri balık tuzlu- the large fish is salty
şu havuz sığ- that swimming pool is shallow

other than that- very good

some little corrections:
akılsız biri- someone stupid
çıkmaz sokak- dead-end street
heyecanlı hikayeler- exciting stories
şÃ¶försüz otobüs- driverless bus
yalancı politikacı- liar politician
bahçeli ev- a house with a garden

also:
candan bir insan- a sincere person
önemli bir emanet- an important deposit (trust)
and you can also translate-
çirkin bir yazı- an ugly handwriting

it is funny though

I'm not giving you promises, you have destroyed my morale (made me depressed)

Hi Trudy,
first- change all the "değil"s in negative sentences to "yok".
and some little corrections:
6th sentence- Cepte para var mı?
last sentence- Marmara denizi