they all look correct

working hard Trudy, here are some corrections:
7. Why don't you have water?
8. Why don't you have hot water?
9. Why don't we have money? (just simpler)
15. Do you have a telephone number?
16. Don't you have an e-mail address?
17. Who has a car?
18. Who has a chewing gum?
22. Aren't my shoes in the room?
23. Doesn't s/he have any opinion?

oh, and in some sentences you haven't translated the word "çok" (very), I don't know if it is important to your teacher (in sentences 19 to 24).

hi Trudy,
you did well, here are what you couldn't translate:
7. You have a good heart.
25. You have an Iranian rug/carpet.
and:
13. S/he has a strong character (not a very important change though)

it should be "okumuyor"- doesn't study

senin için kontrol etmem için bana doğru numarayı vermedin, neden? Onunla konuştuğunda kim olduğunu söylemedi mi?

I think it means:

Are you the tall Huseyin with the long hair? There was a Huseyin Newking but he's probabaly not studying there any more! Explain yourself, I will tell you who you are

Hayır, benim numaram değil, herhalde seni araması için ona vermiştindir

I'll try to translate:

Which losses have I found
even my hand has slipped away from the other
I've thrown a pebble in each town
from my actually non existent sea

I'm passing by like a film tape now
from the insides of my jaywalkings
it was supposed to happen when wanted very much
tell me where you are,
the one who never comes?

These songs
are all lies
why does time take you away from me?
my door(bell) doesn't ring... no one comes...
having no appetite because you're absent,
morning doesn't come

but...
I'm fed up with
darkness...

I left for a vacation, this telephone has been shut, it needs to be done (fixed), ok? Everything is fine here, I'm waiting for you, how's your family, are they well?