Wonderful si++...thank you and Gokuyum.
No offense was intended. You do realize an artist constantly strives to improve their art. It is never done, it is never finished. The exploration continues. I am curious about this phrase, "hala hep" is that an idiomatic thing? When I look in the dictionary, hala means paternal aunt.
I would make some fixes in it but I´m not sure if it would be enough for you. Anyway:
Firstly, there´s no need to translate Gülpembe (means rosepink but it´s a proper name).
Sen gülünce güller açar Gülpembe, When you smiled, it was like roses bloomed Gülpembe
Bülbüller seni söyler, biz dinlerdik Gülpembe. Nightingales would sing you, we would listen, Gülpembe.
Sen gelince bahar gelir Gülpembe, When you came, it would be spring time, Gülpembe
Dereler seni çaglar, sevinirdik Gülpembe. Brooks would gurgle your name, we would enjoy it, Gülpembe
Güz yagmurlariyla bir gün göçtün gittin, And one day you were gone with the autumn rains
Ìnanamadik Gülpembe. We couldn´t believe it, Gülpembe.
Bizim iller sessiz, bizim iller sensiz, Our lands became dead silent, our lands without you,
Olamadi Gülpembe. Couldn´t be Gülpembe
Dudagimda son bir türkü Gülpembe, One last song on my lips Gülpembe
Hala hep seni söyler, seni çagirir Gülpembe. Still always sings you and calls you, Gülpembe
Güz yagmurlariyla bir gün göçtün gittin, And one day you were gone with the autumn rains
Ìnanamadik Gülpembe. We couldn´t believe it, Gülpembe.
Bizim iller sessiz, bizim iller sensiz, Our lands became dead silent, our lands without you,
Olamadi Gülpembe. Couldn´t be Gülpembe
Dudagimda son bir türkü Gülpembe, One last song on my lips Gülpembe
Hala hep seni söyler, seni çagirir Gülpembe. Still always sings you and calls you, Gülpembe
Gözlerimde son bir bulut, Gülpembe, One last cloud on my eyes, Gülpembe
Hala hep seni arar, seni bekler Gülpembe. Still always looks for you, awaits you Gülpembe
Dudagimda son bir türkü Gülpembe, One last song on my lips Gülpembe
Hala hep seni söyler, seni çagirir Gülpembe. Still always sings you and calls you, Gülpembe
Gözlerimde son bir bulut, Gülpembe, One last cloud on my eyes, Gülpembe
Hala hep seni arar, seni bekler Gülpembe. Still always looks for you, awaits you Gülpembe